Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I don't know whether your male or female, but it sounds like you love your husband or wife depending.

Your poem is a beautiful tribute to your spouse. I'm guessing you guys have been together for years through thick and thin through bad and good. That's what a marriage is. supposed to be.

Here's hoping you have many more years to enjoy each other

I thought your poem was written well with the rhyme scheme meter

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

This is a gorgeous romantic poem using the given words in the prompt. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Happy writing and best wishes!!!!!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024