Forgotten Prayers
A penny for your thoughts?5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry reflects a person who's in pain. I could feel the raw emotion as I read. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
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This contest entry reflects a person who's in pain. I could feel the raw emotion as I read. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Sally Law
First, Welcome to FsnStory, LeeAnn! It's so nice to read your acrostic poem today. A stellar offering, with rhyming ends, and, I suspect, a ribbon winner! Fingers crossed!
Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming ABC contest.
Sally :))
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First, Welcome to FsnStory, LeeAnn! It's so nice to read your acrostic poem today. A stellar offering, with rhyming ends, and, I suspect, a ribbon winner! Fingers crossed!
Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming ABC contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from BOO ghost
Looks like a good contender for the ABC contest! I don't talk about religion much anymore. Prayers meant a lot in my younger years. Nice picture! Like that line, Hung my head and then walked off.
I hailed a cab going anywhere. Seen a few of these today! Good luck! Creature of the night.
BOO!
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Looks like a good contender for the ABC contest! I don't talk about religion much anymore. Prayers meant a lot in my younger years. Nice picture! Like that line, Hung my head and then walked off.
I hailed a cab going anywhere. Seen a few of these today! Good luck! Creature of the night.
BOO!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
Comment from PENofFIRE
Excellent entry for this contest. It tells a sad story of a heavy depression in the heart of this person. To me, this is a complete story in just a few lines. Well done. Best wishes in winning the contest.
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Excellent entry for this contest. It tells a sad story of a heavy depression in the heart of this person. To me, this is a complete story in just a few lines. Well done. Best wishes in winning the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
Comment from DJ Allen
Thoughtful poem, enjoyed how it made me think, how sometimes expansion experiences happen which totally change one's world view and it takes awhile before equilibrium is reached again. The seeking continues.
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Thoughtful poem, enjoyed how it made me think, how sometimes expansion experiences happen which totally change one's world view and it takes awhile before equilibrium is reached again. The seeking continues.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
