The Proposal
What Should She Say?2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. The straightforwardness of your words makes the proposal feel genuine and deeply personal. I would never had thought you were following this structure if it hadn't been so. Because this flows so naturally. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and significant piece.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I thought this was great. The straightforwardness of your words makes the proposal feel genuine and deeply personal. I would never had thought you were following this structure if it hadn't been so. Because this flows so naturally. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and significant piece.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your appreciative review!
Comment from jessizero
I love that you leave the answer up to the reader's imagination. You got the syllable counts right for the contest, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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I love that you leave the answer up to the reader's imagination. You got the syllable counts right for the contest, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading this and for your nice review.
