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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from lyenochka
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No, in thirty years, Miranda will be even smarter and will have taught Rita lots of things to keep them away from doing stuff like that. I'm glad Miranda could teach Brenda and Alice something they will always remember!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you, I'm glad you could see the humor or Miranda's statement. Lol. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I love this story. It's funny and well written. Good character development and the plot is easy to follow. You always comes up with the best. You're a great story teller.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Gypsy. I'm having a great time bringing Miranda back. Thanks for the encouraging review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Your line about "those girls need help" made me laugh and put me to thinking back to when I heard an old man tell his waitress she needed a birddog bra. She asked what a birddog bra was, and the old man told her that it made pointers out of setters. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    That is too funny. I have a bird dog myself. The kind with floppy ears. Thank you for making me laugh out loud. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Gretchen,
well, I sincerely hope that in thirty years you won't be reduced to stealing bottles of wine and hiring young male strippers. This was delightful to read. I liked the way Miranda handled the two thieves. Sometimes a person is better off leaving the police out of the situation. Lets hope the gals don't let the grace you offered go unwarranted.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    I stole a pack of gum when I was eight. My mother took me back to the store and made me face the store manager. That was a lesson that left it's mark. No thank you. Lol. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
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Wow! Miranda made a good stab a rehabilitating a thief. At least, Brenda might think before committing to doing something like that again. She is tough but has a good heart. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Beth. I think Miranda saw her possible future and decided to go lightly on them. So glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
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That's like the old fashioned cops, if one went on a shoplifting episode, they'd scare the living daylights out of you, then let you go, if you were a kid, provably drop you home, deliver you to the door to embarrass you, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Miranda was playing with them. She was definitely having a good time though. Gretchen
reply by royowen on 09-Sep-2024
    I can see
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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LOL I couldn't help but smile as I read this. Miranda is a piece of work, and she doesn't completely understand Alice. I so enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Barbara. I needed for Miranda to enjoy herself. Appreciate this stellar rating and kind review. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautifully written chapter and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your week. Many blessings for you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much, Patricia. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Wonderful, Gretchen! This is a complete story in itself. Once again, Miranda proves herself a woman of character, not to be messed with and I love the way she identifies with and respects Alice. The last line is magic! Debbie. I don't supposed Miranda happens to be styled on the author?:)

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Miranda says what I can't. She's a great character to have around. Thank you so much for the nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
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This was a great chapter and the other bottle was a surprise. You are still a great storyteller and all this is so believable. Keep up the good work; I couldn't see any spags this time.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. It was fun to write. Gretchen