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In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne

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Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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I've never been one to know what to say at a time of such terrible loss, but I'm sure all the kind and caring words I've read from those of you who have the gift of poetry will touch Nomi in his time of need. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the lovely review, my friend. Both prose and poetry can be in the book, it just must be written under the proper heading in edit. Anyway, a kind review means so much to Nomi and Im sure he appreciates you sharing.
    Sending along my bery best.
    Sal :)) xo
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Sally,
I'm glad that you have posted this poem of comfort for Nomi. I've read a number of posts in support of him and his family, and it's good to be a part of a group of such compassionate people.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Tom, thank you so much for the lovely review and kind words. Yes, we tend to circle around each other when tragedy, death and loss strike. These books are a real treasure and for those of us the have eternal flame, the tribute books can be viewed from our portfolios even after we've left FanStory or passed away. Debi Pick Marquette, Karenina, Pam(Respa) and I have eternal flame and so do many others. I've been a part of many books, and I think this is my fifth tribute book. Please join us if you can.
    Blessing to you always.
    Sal :))
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sally, I'm sure Nolan will find solace in your beautifully written poem for him and his late wife. I know how difficult this time must be for him. All my best, Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Ulla, Thank you for the lovely review and kind words for Nomi. I'm sure it has brought him a lot of comfort. All my best.
    Sal Xos
Comment from nancyjam
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I'm sure your beautiful poem will be such a comfort to Nomi, as it is a reminder that she will be with him again. God has a plan and we never
know what He has in mind, but He is with us through all of our journeys,
even the tough ones.
Beautifully crafted with strong rhyme and meter.
Nancy

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Dear Nancy,
    Thank you for the lovely review and uplifting words for Nomi, my friend. It will bless him greatly.
    Blessings to you always.
    Sal Xos
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Sally, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and soulful words.
I know that Nomi will love this poem, and he will heed its words of
truth, faith, and wisdom. Of special note:

His strength will lift us from the stormy sea.
His mercy is as faithful as the sunrise--
His promises for all Eternity.

(So true. Amen.)

Beautiful, contemplative photo. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Dear Margaret,
    Thank you for the wonderful review and uplifting words for Nomi, my friend. It will bless him greatly.
    Blessings to you always.
    Sal Xoxo's
Comment from Harry Craft
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Great Poem for a great tribute. A very sad subject that we all must face sometime in our life. However, a very real and true subject. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Harry, thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated.
    Blessings,
    Sally :))
reply by Harry Craft on 12-Sep-2024
    You are so welcome Sally!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello. I hope you are enjoying a happy day! Your well-written poem will be such a blessing to Nolan as he grieves for her. You did a fine job in relating compassion and eternal hope... a write that is a blessing to all of us!

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Dear Melissa, Thank you for the lovely review and uplifting words for Nomi, my friend. It will bless him greatly.
    Blessings to you always.
    Sal Xos
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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a powerful and moving tribute to the memory of a lost wife for our friend Nomi. How do I add my own poem to this book? I'd like to do that. I like this poem because it expresses the loss of a love one in moving langauge

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Jake. I'm sure Nomi appreciates your kind words.

    To join the book is easy. When your ready, come back to my post and look just above the review box. You will see a green button that says, multi-author book. Press the button and it will take you into the next available chapter of the book in FS editor. You can add your own photo from you photo library or choose FanArt and post as you like. Make sure it's in edit preview. Check yes for preview so you won't go live until you're ready. :))

    I hope that's helpful.

    Thanks again and my best wishes with your posting.
    Sal :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A soothing and gentle poem for Nomi in his hour of need and I enjoyed the sentiments. Losing a partner is devastating and leaves an emptiness that never goes away, my heart goes out to him, a fine poem Sally, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Dear Doll, Thank you for the super kind review and uplifting words for Nomi, my friend. It will bless him greatly.
    Blessings to you always.
    Sal Xoxo's
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Beautiful image and nice presentation, Sal.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening line and comforting words
about how He will help us, like lifting "us from the stormy sea,"
and the comparison of "His mercy" to the sunrise.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Pam dear, Thank you for the lovely review and uplifting words for Nomi, my friend. It will bless him greatly. I'm coming to your post for Nomi soon, I promise.
    Blessings to you always.
    Sal Xos
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Sep-2024
    You are very welcome for everything, Sal. I'm sure he is appreciating all of the thoughts and prayers that are coming his way.