The Ghost of Me
This poem3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading understand the feeling. I see a lot of rhyming words, but I'm not seeing a consistent rhyming pattern. Maybe it's just me. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading understand the feeling. I see a lot of rhyming words, but I'm not seeing a consistent rhyming pattern. Maybe it's just me. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from amosajames
Lovely poem about spirits and their haunting nature. I could feel your belief in ghosts and that you have have had experiences yourself to inspire these words.
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Lovely poem about spirits and their haunting nature. I could feel your belief in ghosts and that you have have had experiences yourself to inspire these words.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Excuse me if my interpretation is wrong, but I see your person being drawn in by the past and the sorrow it carried and then standing strong, shoving it aside with a simple... I will not stay, knowing there will be tomorrows and the light will shine.
smiles, Carol
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Excuse me if my interpretation is wrong, but I see your person being drawn in by the past and the sorrow it carried and then standing strong, shoving it aside with a simple... I will not stay, knowing there will be tomorrows and the light will shine.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
