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In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Grief Goes Deep"
Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him

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Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Dolly,
thank you for penning this heartfelt poem. What you've written is so true, we will all face death sooner or later, either of someone we love or our own. The best thing we can do is empathize and offer whatever comfort we can. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    Thank you Tom for your review, glad you enjoyed this tribute, love Dolly x
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This is a beautiful poem for nomi at this time of heartbreak. I have read some beautiful posts and I'm sure his tears will flow when he teads them. Beautifully said Dolly.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you Valda for your review, I am glad you enjoyed this one and are all praying that Nomi can cope his grief over time, love Dolly x x x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Thanks for sharing this poem of love and comfort for Nomi. The prayers of everyone on Fanstory are continuing to go out for him. I love the cndle artwork you chose to go with the poem.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you Marilyn for your review, glad you enjoye this poem, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
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This a beautiful poem for our precious Nomi, dear Doll, and addition to the tribute book. Thank you for this and the gift of you. I'm sure it blessed and comforted him in many ways.

Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you Sally for your review, I am so glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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When these things happen I wonder if anything we say will help. When my momma died I just got online and wrote poems about her, and nostalgia stories, and that is how I coped. Oh, yea, and I killed off men on here, that always perks me up. Good writing. Karen

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you Karen for your review, I think support is always welcome when someone is suffering grief, love Dolly x
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Sep-2024
    Amen sister, :-)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Dolly, this is so beautiful and will feel like a balm when it's read, I am sure. You have such a warm, capable wisdom, and at such a time as this, it means the world. xoxo

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Rachelle for your review, I am honoured by your words, we all know how difficult it is to grieve and losing someone this close is so traumatic and life changing, love Dolly x
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Hi Dolly, I am just seeing this beautiful poem for Nomi. It is as touching as it is lovely and is one more piece to the puzzle that will give him comfort when he needs it. I know he is looking forward to printing all of these for his family as well.

My favorite verse is priorities soon change when we are lost inside such grief, and linking hands with you and me is always very brief. Virtual Six!!

So meaningful and gorgeous poem, Dolly. Thank you for contributing to Nomi's book. Lotsa love, my dear friend. Debi

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Debi for your intuitive review and kind words. We are all familiar with grief and everyone suffers in different ways but we have an underlying empathy for our fellow men in this regard. Although we have never met Nomi, we understand the impact losing a partner has on a family and in particular himself and our prayers are with him at this time. I am honoured by your virtual six stars Debi and I appreciate your thoughtful review, love Dolly x x x
Comment from judiverse
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You chose a lovely image, and one that's so appropriately. One writer noted that Nomi's wife had died in her sleep. That to me would be a comfort. You spend so many anxious hours worrying and wondering if there's a long illness leading up to the death. Life certainly changes when you have to deal with such grief. It does help to have support from friends and loved ones, and this book will certainly be a comfort to him. Excellent words of comfort and great job with rhyme in this. judi

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Judi for your review, the circumstances of a death leaves a lasting stain on our memory of a person as we don't want that person to suffer. I appreciate your comments Judi, love Dolly x
reply by judiverse on 13-Sep-2024
    You're very welcome. Enjoy your weekend coming up. judi
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Have a great weekend Judi x x x
reply by judiverse on 13-Sep-2024
    You too! judi
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem for Nolan, and having been through this yourself, your writing shows you understand and care. He will appreciate this lovely poem of care and encouragement.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Wendy for your review, grief is such a hard emotion to deal with and it can destroy our self esteem and building ourselves back up takes an enormous amount of courage, I appreciate your comments Wendy, love Dolly x
Comment from Samantha Wymer
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There are no words to express when we lost the people we love and to see others grief. I do know everyone grieves differently and it others long to heal enough to keep on living. I love your poem, I can feel the pain reading each word. Great job Dolly!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Samantha for your review, I appreciate your kind words, love Dolly x