It Wasn't Me!
Don't be so quick to place the blame19 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This sounds suspiciously like some school mornings in my house when all four kids were three to seven years old. Dad doesn't seem like he is too much with it and mom should have picked a different time to make appointments.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This sounds suspiciously like some school mornings in my house when all four kids were three to seven years old. Dad doesn't seem like he is too much with it and mom should have picked a different time to make appointments.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Yes, nothing seems to be going the way they wanted, but isn't that how life goes when you have small children...well, children of any age. LOL Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Priceless. Reminds me of a song...Saturday morning confusion. Can't remember who sang it. Sounds like a fairly normal family with the usual chaos. Esther
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Priceless. Reminds me of a song...Saturday morning confusion. Can't remember who sang it. Sounds like a fairly normal family with the usual chaos. Esther
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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A new picture, my dear. Very nice!
Now that you mention it, I think I do remember a song like that. Don't ask me the name but I know it was something resembling this chaos.
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks Carol.
Comment from royowen
I wonder how many tales of woe have been made in the name of the household pets, I must admit our girls didn't make any, but they were conscientious souls, I love this great chaotic story about the average family household, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I wonder how many tales of woe have been made in the name of the household pets, I must admit our girls didn't make any, but they were conscientious souls, I love this great chaotic story about the average family household, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Poor little pups! those eyes on this one begged me to write a story about him and there wasn't anything else I could do. I am glad that you enjoyed the amusing story.
Smiles, Carol
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Your a softy Carol.
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That I am!
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Bless you Carol,
Comment from Thesis
I liked this story. It was a refreshing change from some of the stories I've been reading lately. And, who could get mad at a puppy, even if he may have been the prime suspect for the squishy substance.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I liked this story. It was a refreshing change from some of the stories I've been reading lately. And, who could get mad at a puppy, even if he may have been the prime suspect for the squishy substance.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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thanks so much! His eyes just begged me to write a story about him and there was no way I could refuse. He was so adorable. I appreciate your time and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a nice story. It was imaginative and very interesting. You described the characters well. The dog is adorable. The picture is great. I like the way you started the story.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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What a nice story. It was imaginative and very interesting. You described the characters well. The dog is adorable. The picture is great. I like the way you started the story.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Hello, Brenda! Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and read this story. I couldn't refuse those sweet eyes that begged me to write a story about him. Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of those cases where the cute little story and the darling picture of the endearingly beautiful pooch will keep a smile on my face throughout the day or longer. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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This is one of those cases where the cute little story and the darling picture of the endearingly beautiful pooch will keep a smile on my face throughout the day or longer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I saw this little guy's beautiful eyes and I knew he was begging for me to write a story about him. How could I refuse? It was puppy love at first sight. thanks so much for stopping by. Smiles, Carol
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The instant I saw him I shared your feelings. He almost looked just like two little buddies I once had name Max and Mo. One was black, the other grey. :-)
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How adorable! Just like their owner....
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Well that was certainly a day of chaos and disasters - and yes, poor Snickers shouldn't have to take the blame for every single thing that went wrong. Very humorous!
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Lol. Well that was certainly a day of chaos and disasters - and yes, poor Snickers shouldn't have to take the blame for every single thing that went wrong. Very humorous!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Wendy! I saw those sweet eyes looking at me and begging for a story and I just couldn't resist. Appreciate the review and thank you for enjoying the story.
smiles, Carol
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Carol,
I loved this story. It sounds like my parents' home sixty years ago. Your humor is great, and I can see the sweet expression on the puppy's face.
(My dog then ate a box of crayons and our yard was colorful for a few weeks after).
Nice story, Carol.
Blessings,
and best wishes for a nice week,
Cindy.
Cute photo too.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Carol,
I loved this story. It sounds like my parents' home sixty years ago. Your humor is great, and I can see the sweet expression on the puppy's face.
(My dog then ate a box of crayons and our yard was colorful for a few weeks after).
Nice story, Carol.
Blessings,
and best wishes for a nice week,
Cindy.
Cute photo too.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Cindy!
I could never resist a puppy! So of course I had to write the story. I am happy that you enjoyed it as well. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from SimianSavant
Yup sounds about right. This started very well, with excellent detail. I was expecting maybe a little more of a punchline or drama by the 2/3 mark, and definitely by the end, to bookend this piece. The only bookend was with the picture, which admittedly is pretty good. What AI engine did you use?
"all-knowing mom look." <= I suggest removing the quotes here, to avoid confusion with the dialogue which immediately follows it, where you do actually need quotes. As a general rule, a paragraph only has one speaker in it, and although you only have one speaker in the paraphrase it makes it FEEL as though there are two (the narrator being the second).
Thanks for the read,
🦍
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Yup sounds about right. This started very well, with excellent detail. I was expecting maybe a little more of a punchline or drama by the 2/3 mark, and definitely by the end, to bookend this piece. The only bookend was with the picture, which admittedly is pretty good. What AI engine did you use?
"all-knowing mom look." <= I suggest removing the quotes here, to avoid confusion with the dialogue which immediately follows it, where you do actually need quotes. As a general rule, a paragraph only has one speaker in it, and although you only have one speaker in the paraphrase it makes it FEEL as though there are two (the narrator being the second).
Thanks for the read,
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read my little story and to find it worthy of a review. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Cute story! Why does everyone blame the dog? LOL. Dad's first clue should have been that the baby had no diaper. I'm surprised he didn't smell her. Hahaha. The picture is cute. I'm not sure about the story opening, though.
Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Cute story! Why does everyone blame the dog? LOL. Dad's first clue should have been that the baby had no diaper. I'm surprised he didn't smell her. Hahaha. The picture is cute. I'm not sure about the story opening, though.
Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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I saw this picture this morning and the pups eyes said write a story about me...He was so cute and I couldn't refuse. Thanks for reading and the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, those eyes are begging for a story!