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Sally's Accident

Playing football in the house ~ JK

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
This is a nice poem to ask for quick healing for Sally. I am sorry she hurt herself. Thanks for letting us know in this poem. I will put her in my prayer.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from gansach
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Oh no! Poor Sally, that must have hurt. I know how painful just stubbing your toe can be. Sending lots of good healing vibes and prayers to Sally so her foot is soon better and a request to please be careful! Your poem is sweet, Debi, thanks for sharing it!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for letting us know, Debi! She's been in my prayers for healing for her stomach issues and that her eyes would not deteriorate further. I didn't know about her accident. That makes three ladies I know about who had falls. Praying!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from royowen
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Thanks for telling me, Debi, she probably wouldn't trumpet to the world about that, but I'm thankful that you have, I think she will be grateful, you are a true blessing Debi, and with a skilfully written poem too, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    LOL, Roy, I actually wasn't going to and that is why you heard from me a couple weeks late. But Sally herself suggested writing her own poem, and that is when I offered yesterday, so I felt really bad I hadn't offered in the first place. So let's chalk it up to a little fun as I did get a few smiles out of it and you were absolutely right, it made her smile, and that made it all worth it to me. Thanks so much Roy for always being so sweet and such a good friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
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Oh no! Not the toe.
That is a painful- don't I know.
So sorry to hear about Sal's misadventure. I recently stubbed my toe and went sprawling across the floor. Fortunately, I only had a few bruises.
Nicely done Debi

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from LJbutterfly
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I don't know how you do it, but you can create a story in rhyme about anything. I'm glad you used your poetry skills to tell us about Sally. You even included a little humor. My prayers are for Sally's speedy recovery. Great job, Debi.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from Katiemae1977
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Cute would be the best way to describe this Debi.
I'm sure Sally appreciates it. Sprains can be worse than a break
I hope she better soon

This is a great poem with excellent rhyme and meter
Well done!
��Luv&stuff Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from Ulla
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I'm so sorry to hear this, I hope Sally will recover soon. It easy to.bang your toe like that even if you can see. I've done it a few times, and it hurts like hell. Scuse the language. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from Carol Clark2
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I love the humor of the ending of your poem! Great line! Thanks for sharing about Sal's accident. It's got to be rough to find your way around the house without vision. I've been praying for her, and will continue. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024

Comment from GWHARGIS
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Oh no! Poor Sally. I've whacked my foot on the bed post a time or two but mine was just carelessness. Poor kid is going to be in a boot. Hoping she heals quickly. Gretchen

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024