Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Eugene,
This is a wonderful 5-7-5 you eloquently describe a pumpkin patch in just 17 syllables.
Your last line sums up your creative poem so well.
Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. We have beautiful foliage here in PA.
Good luck and best wishes!
Cindy

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote!

Thank god for a poem that has nothing to do about Halloween which I don't care for.

I love autumn for its warm vivid hues and for its many gift of the land like the pumpkin which your poem speaks about.

Best of luck!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024

Tempeste,

Thank you for your many congratulations on the wins in the various Fanstory writing contests. Eight years ago I began this journey as a novice poet and writer and have over the years learned from many of the best and most talented writers and poets who have all been inspired and encouraged me to become a better writer. I'm overwhelmed and surprised by the 10 wins I've received in the past two months.

You have been a wonderful reviewer of my poems and writings and I appreciate your help and encouragement in helping me to achieve success.

All the best,

Eugene

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

It is quite a sight to see a field of pumpkins and I am sure that you would enjoy seeing one too. I enjoyed your short pumpkin poem, and I wish you the very best in the contest. patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024

Patricia,

Thank you for your many congratulations on the wins in the various Fanstory writing contests. Eight years ago I began this journey as a novice poet and writer and have over the years learned from many of the best and most talented writers and poets who have all been inspired and encouraged me to become a better writer. I'm overwhelmed and surprised by the 10 wins I've received in the past two months.

You have been a wonderful reviewer of my poems and writings and I appreciate your help and encouragement in helping me to achieve success.

All the best,

Eugene

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a feel good poem. I like the image of a field of pumpkins. Your use of words make the pumpkins come alive, like they are live characters. Excellent haiku form that fits the Autumn season.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024

Mermaids,

Thank you for your review. Eight years ago I began this journey as a novice poet and writer and have over the years learned from many of the best and most talented writers and poets who have all been inspired and encouraged me to become a better writer. I'm overwhelmed and surprised by the 10 wins I've received in the past two months.

You have been a wonderful reviewer of my poems and writings and I appreciate your help and encouragement in helping me to achieve success.

All the best,

Eugene