Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Well, that was totally unexpected! Lol. She's not the only one to be surprised - I bet he was too at receiving that kiss on the lips. Well written - a fun read.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you! Getting close to the end.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I couldn't help but smile and giggle at the kiss Hattie planted on Art's lips. It's wonderful!!! I guess romance at the 70+ age, and why not. The ladies do have more information. I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

It did turn out cute. I didn't want raunchy. Thank you for the awesome review! We are nearing the end!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Holy cow! You have so many characters. LoL

I had a Pekingese dog when I was little. Her name was Funny. I had to give her up when my dad married the wicked witch of the east.

I like the plot so far. Humorous plot and characters.

Well done

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks! A fun one for me to delve into!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

And now a little romance in the making! Hattie is a walk-over or that man has looks and charm in abundance. Mind you, I think his addition to the evidence has also been a turn-on for Hattie! I'm enjoying your fun-filled murder mystery, quite a contrast from the usual blood and gore...or are you just saving that up? Well done, Doug! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank, Debbie! No gore in this one.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I never have seen a Pekingese that was cute. Aren't they the ones with the crunched-up nose?

Only blooper is in the last paragraph where Art is spelled art in the second line.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks, my friend!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It looks like Hattie has connected with Art Antacta, and she's the one who planted the kiss on him, I wonder how they are going to the crime Douglas? Art has confessed to putting the note under Hattie's door, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Typo : Maybe I should (have) change(d) the subject.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks Roy! We are nearing the finish line.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Aren't you the sly one, Doug! Slipping in a little budding romance behind the closed doors. And you did it so well! And go Hattie! Take the bull by the horns and plant that kiss on Art's lips - Maybe standoffish Art is really ArtSmart - cause he caught Hattie just like that! Good one!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Added a new element to the rapidly finishing story!!!!

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

Now, I'm blushing, too. I love this story. It has humor, romance and intrigue. Although I haven't read your prior stories (I'm new to FanStory), I will look out for the next chapter.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you and welcome aboard!

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Now you will have to call him Artifact.T his story is involving. I finished my 4 part Theodore story yesterday. It was fun. I admit I am a bit warped, but who wants to be normal? Love to you and yours. good writing. Karen

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thanks, Karen!

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Oct-2024

:-)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I absolutely love the way you show the relationship between Hattie and Art! You've really captured that sense of unexpected romance blossoming. The inner dialogue from Hattie is charming, especially when she's trying to stay focused on the case but keeps getting distracted by how cute Art is! Great job!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024

Thank you for hanging in!