Birthday Puff
3-5-3 Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
And as you age, you forget the puff if you want the cake to be edible and not covered with your germs.... no air left to puff! Cute and fun to read!
Smiles, Carol
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And as you age, you forget the puff if you want the cake to be edible and not covered with your germs.... no air left to puff! Cute and fun to read!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I suppose it depends on how long we live and how many candles are on the cake! And with age we run our of puff, so we may need three goes at this one, a fun post, love Dolly x
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I suppose it depends on how long we live and how many candles are on the cake! And with age we run our of puff, so we may need three goes at this one, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt. This is a cute poem and accurate as we rarely know if we can blow out all those candles as we get older! Especially when someone sneaks on the candles that won't blow out. Good job.
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An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt. This is a cute poem and accurate as we rarely know if we can blow out all those candles as we get older! Especially when someone sneaks on the candles that won't blow out. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Ha - Clever poem based around the theme of "air". Meets the competition rules and should be a contender for the prize. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Ha - Clever poem based around the theme of "air". Meets the competition rules and should be a contender for the prize. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from Gayla putnam
This poem assignment is intriguing to me. Of course, I counted the syllables. It is such a happy subject and an excellent picture to go with the poem. You created a happy glow with your poetry. gayla
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This poem assignment is intriguing to me. Of course, I counted the syllables. It is such a happy subject and an excellent picture to go with the poem. You created a happy glow with your poetry. gayla
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024