Reviews from
50 Word Flash Fiction
3 total reviews
Comment from
F. William Lester
Nicely done. Charlie didn't choose to live in the past and in most cases that's for the best. I found the middle a little confusing. Born in a generation that isn't necessarily tech savvy, it took me a moment to understand the scrolling, which was apparently on his phone. I assumed the dialogue was a memory. Fifty words of prose is difficult at best. You did a credible job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from
DonandVicki
The one genre that guarantees that the reader engages his imagination is through short flash fiction. So few words well written, leads me to visualise a lost romance.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from
Nicki.B
Haha! I was wondering where this was going to go. And I really didn't think it would go how it did, so love that and unexpected twist to this short story. It really made me laugh. I went on to read the prompt and laughed some more, wrote a dribble story with 50 word count! Ah refreshing. Good luck with the contest. Well done!
Best wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
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