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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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It does sound a bit as if Oliver threw her to the wolves and led the police to become suspicious of her. I hope whatever Callum says doesn't make everything worse.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I like the way, Danielle is being reminded again of her experience as a child with the police and I could imagine this in a flashback in a film. She's in a tricky position answering questions and fearing she's being overheard and I think this dialogue is particularly well done. Thanks for sharing, Jacob. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Have a good weekend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I do hope the police things something is going on. I would be nice if they took Danielle down to the station to talk with her, so she'd have more freedom to talk. I love the story.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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So Danielle believes this was a murder. It would seem someone committing suicide wouldn't scream. But I am wondering who would be there to kill him. I wouldn't think the ladies would be strong enough to hurl him through a window. Anxious for more.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Hi Jacob,

Another awesome chapter. Here again you left me hanging wanting more. I love this book and I believe it will be a best seller when you are done.

Great Job

Cecilia

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the six stars, Cecilla, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 31-Oct-2024
    You're welcome. I am very stingy with my six star reviews. I give them only for the best. You my friend deserved them.
Comment from Begin Again
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She's afraid, but I thought for sure she would tell about Noah since she'd been so worried before his death, and now she makes it appear as an accident. I'd hate to live with that one, Danielle! Oh there, I go crawling into your character's mind... I'll back out and let you get on with the story. LOL
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.