His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "His Silence - Chapter 69"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
But can Danielle really trust Eve? I'm not sure anybody other than Callum can be trusted. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. You're doing a great job writing it.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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But can Danielle really trust Eve? I'm not sure anybody other than Callum can be trusted. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. You're doing a great job writing it.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The tension continues to be conveyed here so it's a nice contrast when the arrangement is made for her to sleep in the same room as Eve. Surely Danielle should be thinking of leaving now? Thank you for sharing, Jacob. The book continues to intrigue. take care Debbie
You've suffered enough trauma as it (is) and I'm worried (about) you
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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The tension continues to be conveyed here so it's a nice contrast when the arrangement is made for her to sleep in the same room as Eve. Surely Danielle should be thinking of leaving now? Thank you for sharing, Jacob. The book continues to intrigue. take care Debbie
You've suffered enough trauma as it (is) and I'm worried (about) you
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, and for spotting those errors. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, okay, well Oliver is certainly staying in character. He orders people around and makes decisions for them. Glad he didn't want Danielle to sleep with him. That would have been awkward and dangerous. It's hard not to sympathize with Abraham, but he did try to kill Danielle.
Great chapter,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Wow, okay, well Oliver is certainly staying in character. He orders people around and makes decisions for them. Glad he didn't want Danielle to sleep with him. That would have been awkward and dangerous. It's hard not to sympathize with Abraham, but he did try to kill Danielle.
Great chapter,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Always!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
Another awesome chapter. What is old Oliver up to? He appears to be a control freak and an evil man. Like I always say, you leave your reader's sitting on the edge of their seats in suspense waiting for the next chapter.
Great job as always
Cecilia
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Jacob,
Another awesome chapter. What is old Oliver up to? He appears to be a control freak and an evil man. Like I always say, you leave your reader's sitting on the edge of their seats in suspense waiting for the next chapter.
Great job as always
Cecilia
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilla, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome. Do you ever sleep? Ha, ha.
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Comment from BethShelby
I don't know why Danielle goes along with almost anything that suggested to her. She doesnt't have that close a relationship with Eve. How can't imagine her being comfortable sleeping in Eve's room. Eve may want her dead. I would be afraid to trust any of them.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I don't know why Danielle goes along with almost anything that suggested to her. She doesnt't have that close a relationship with Eve. How can't imagine her being comfortable sleeping in Eve's room. Eve may want her dead. I would be afraid to trust any of them.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Supposedly, Abraham is gone so the threat should be too...why does he act as if she's still in danger and needs someone to watch her? Is he afraid she might leave too? Lots of questions, Jacob. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Supposedly, Abraham is gone so the threat should be too...why does he act as if she's still in danger and needs someone to watch her? Is he afraid she might leave too? Lots of questions, Jacob. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.