The Babbling Brook
Life around a babbling brook32 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
Pam, as I have said before, you amaze me at the number of topics you write about. You make a simple thing into a story with such beautiful imagery. I like the fact that you take both life and death to acknowledge nature's beauty on display. Well done.
Just wondering about the queen bee left alive from the hungry bear. Enough to keep the story going next season. =)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Pam, as I have said before, you amaze me at the number of topics you write about. You make a simple thing into a story with such beautiful imagery. I like the fact that you take both life and death to acknowledge nature's beauty on display. Well done.
Just wondering about the queen bee left alive from the hungry bear. Enough to keep the story going next season. =)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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hi Shanbreen
Lol about the story going on into the next season
I think I have two poems about bees that I've already written that need tweaking.
Thanks so much for all of your encouragement, Support, the six stars and a wonderful review you are valued my friend
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This book is alive with natures creatures and I heard the sounds and watched the activity here play out before me with your well chosen words and rhymes Pam, I was entertained with the beauty of nature here, love Dolly x
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This book is alive with natures creatures and I heard the sounds and watched the activity here play out before me with your well chosen words and rhymes Pam, I was entertained with the beauty of nature here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Dolly so much for your wonderful words and a lovely review
Comment from Wendy G
That is a VERY well-written poem, bringing to life the world of nature around the brook. Your descriptions are vivid and realistic, and presented in a thoughtful and wondering way. Very pleasing poem. Well done.
Wendy
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That is a VERY well-written poem, bringing to life the world of nature around the brook. Your descriptions are vivid and realistic, and presented in a thoughtful and wondering way. Very pleasing poem. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Wendy for your kind words and a lovely review
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem described the scene around the 'babbling brook' in graphic terms, easy for readers to visualise and comprehend. The first stanza most appeals to me. Well done, dear. Do have a lovely day.
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The poem described the scene around the 'babbling brook' in graphic terms, easy for readers to visualise and comprehend. The first stanza most appeals to me. Well done, dear. Do have a lovely day.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you esotine for a great review
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this very well written poem about nature. The imagery is superb and the artwork is very well chosen. Thanks so much for sharing Pam.
Best wishes. Jen
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I really enjoyed reading this very well written poem about nature. The imagery is superb and the artwork is very well chosen. Thanks so much for sharing Pam.
Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Jen for the shiny stars and a wonderful review. Both are greatly appreciated.
Comment from MissMerri
A true delight to read this descriptive poem. The whole nature scene was so clear and irresistible. I love places such as you have described here. It reminds me of places I often visited while riding my horse in the mountains around Donner Lake. Your skill with meter and rhyme are evident throughout this poem. I hope I have conveyed how much I enjoyed your writing. Keep it up. MM
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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A true delight to read this descriptive poem. The whole nature scene was so clear and irresistible. I love places such as you have described here. It reminds me of places I often visited while riding my horse in the mountains around Donner Lake. Your skill with meter and rhyme are evident throughout this poem. I hope I have conveyed how much I enjoyed your writing. Keep it up. MM
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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hi MissMerri You have conveyed how much you enjoyed my poem. And I appreciate that. Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is beautiful and very creative. You brought the babbling brook to life with detailed descriptions and vivid imagery. You put the reader by the side of the brook listening to the sounds and watching the activity. I really enjoyed being there.
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This poem is beautiful and very creative. You brought the babbling brook to life with detailed descriptions and vivid imagery. You put the reader by the side of the brook listening to the sounds and watching the activity. I really enjoyed being there.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you LJ for your lovely words and a wonderful review
Comment from Boogienights
Oh wow, I love this wonderfully descriptive poem. What's even better Than the descriptions is the feeling of movement throughout the poem. You have really brought the Forrest to live with this piece.
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Oh wow, I love this wonderfully descriptive poem. What's even better Than the descriptions is the feeling of movement throughout the poem. You have really brought the Forrest to live with this piece.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you boogie nights for your wonderful words and a great review
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
This lovely poem is full of little surprises. I love that this brook has so much going on -- things that passersby might miss.
Excellent rhyme poem, Pam.
Best wishes!
Cindy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Pam,
This lovely poem is full of little surprises. I love that this brook has so much going on -- things that passersby might miss.
Excellent rhyme poem, Pam.
Best wishes!
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you Cindy for your wonderful words and a great review
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Babbling Brook, brings the life of the biome that exists along this stretch of rippling water into our senses as we realize that billions of lives make up this zone.
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This poem, The Babbling Brook, brings the life of the biome that exists along this stretch of rippling water into our senses as we realize that billions of lives make up this zone.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you Bill for this great review