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Comment from Mark Schardine
Our minds grow old as our bodies do, and for reasons we cannot explain, we somehow let youthful spirit disappear from our thoughts. Mind and body are not separate after all.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Our minds grow old as our bodies do, and for reasons we cannot explain, we somehow let youthful spirit disappear from our thoughts. Mind and body are not separate after all.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Ah! them good old fearless days, I often wonder if nowadays it is fear or age that slows us down a bit, maybe even what some call common sense, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Ah! them good old fearless days, I often wonder if nowadays it is fear or age that slows us down a bit, maybe even what some call common sense, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
What I feel from this poem is nostalgia in looking back at the things I use to do in my youth, things that I can no longer do without great effort. Then in faith, I relive some moments and recapture moments of my youthfulness.
Well written.
RJ
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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What I feel from this poem is nostalgia in looking back at the things I use to do in my youth, things that I can no longer do without great effort. Then in faith, I relive some moments and recapture moments of my youthfulness.
Well written.
RJ
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Your free verse speaks to me about the carefree times of youth when it was so much easier to have faith before all the waves started crashing on the worn-out rocks. Even as we get worn out, may our faith keep growing stronger and fly free in the wind of the Spirit!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Your free verse speaks to me about the carefree times of youth when it was so much easier to have faith before all the waves started crashing on the worn-out rocks. Even as we get worn out, may our faith keep growing stronger and fly free in the wind of the Spirit!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. I appreciate your six stars review.
love,
MariVal 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautifully poignant verse looking back on youthful years, at one with nature and confidently facing the world with joy and courage, a contrast to the way the narrator now feels. I love the alliterative last line, my favourite. Thank you, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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A beautifully poignant verse looking back on youthful years, at one with nature and confidently facing the world with joy and courage, a contrast to the way the narrator now feels. I love the alliterative last line, my favourite. Thank you, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and what is it about the ocean? Back in my non-gimp days when I was the vocalist for our heavy metal band, I used to drive forty minutes so I could sit by an inlet of the ocean and wrute song lyrics. Don't know why
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and what is it about the ocean? Back in my non-gimp days when I was the vocalist for our heavy metal band, I used to drive forty minutes so I could sit by an inlet of the ocean and wrute song lyrics. Don't know why
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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That sounds wonderful, Mike.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I used to drive to the beach all the time when I lived close to San Francisco. Now I live and los angeles and I don't drive anymore... I gave my car to my son.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Been 25 years since I could drive
Comment from shelley kaye
i prefer to stand on the sidewalk away from the sandy sand and water LOL!
a great free verse with totally cool imagery and beach rock pic
love these lines. . .
I hide behind the reeds
knee-deep in muck
watching the youthful me
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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i prefer to stand on the sidewalk away from the sandy sand and water LOL!
a great free verse with totally cool imagery and beach rock pic
love these lines. . .
I hide behind the reeds
knee-deep in muck
watching the youthful me
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a wonderful description:
watching the youthful me
stroll gracefully
filled with wild lust
Once again, your talents shines through perfectly with this poem. Thank you for sharing this gift with us.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This is a wonderful description:
watching the youthful me
stroll gracefully
filled with wild lust
Once again, your talents shines through perfectly with this poem. Thank you for sharing this gift with us.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is nicely written and it reads very well when it is read aloud your presentation is very nice as well. May you have a wonderful weekend and make God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This is nicely written and it reads very well when it is read aloud your presentation is very nice as well. May you have a wonderful weekend and make God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊