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Comment from BethShelby
I'm always blown away by how beautifully you illustrate you poems. This haiku is nice. I ididn't realize there were so many different ways haiku could be written.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I'm always blown away by how beautifully you illustrate you poems. This haiku is nice. I ididn't realize there were so many different ways haiku could be written.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
There are many different kinds of haiku and other Japanese poetry. I have clubs for both.
Gypsy
Comment from BethShelby
I'm always blown away by how beautifully you illustrate you poems. This haiku is nice. I ididn't realize there were so many different ways haiku could be written.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I'm always blown away by how beautifully you illustrate you poems. This haiku is nice. I ididn't realize there were so many different ways haiku could be written.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
I love the imagery of moonlight luring one to the land of dreams where you become the light in someone's eyes! Perfect artwork to add to the mystical experience. I enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I love the imagery of moonlight luring one to the land of dreams where you become the light in someone's eyes! Perfect artwork to add to the mystical experience. I enjoyed the read
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, I think we all have this dream, to be the love, to give the love, and to receive the love that will outlast eternity, a wonderful vision in your words, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Beautiful, I think we all have this dream, to be the love, to give the love, and to receive the love that will outlast eternity, a wonderful vision in your words, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
HBR,
Such a romantic poem you created for this ekphrastic poem offering. Your chosen illustration goes very nice with your verse.
Do like your color images and your alliterative first line.
MDR
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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HBR,
Such a romantic poem you created for this ekphrastic poem offering. Your chosen illustration goes very nice with your verse.
Do like your color images and your alliterative first line.
MDR
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cool dreamy haiku and pics
i like the imagery of sleeping beneath a golden moon dreaming
one suggestion i have is maybe change the first 'the' to 'a'?
"sweet slumber
neath a golden moon --
dreaming to be
the light in your eyes"
just a thought ;)
nice flow, no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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cool dreamy haiku and pics
i like the imagery of sleeping beneath a golden moon dreaming
one suggestion i have is maybe change the first 'the' to 'a'?
"sweet slumber
neath a golden moon --
dreaming to be
the light in your eyes"
just a thought ;)
nice flow, no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley, good subjection
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We should all be the light in someone's eyes. We deserve that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. We are blessed by reading this.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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We should all be the light in someone's eyes. We deserve that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. We are blessed by reading this.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from royowen
What a great presentation on this terrific short form poem, all your works are particularly well presented dear friend, and this is four lines, thanks for blowing the strict theories, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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What a great presentation on this terrific short form poem, all your works are particularly well presented dear friend, and this is four lines, thanks for blowing the strict theories, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Well done
Comment from patcelaw
This is wonderfully worded in your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best for the week. I also wish you a very good weekend and a merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This is wonderfully worded in your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best for the week. I also wish you a very good weekend and a merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully and hypnotically done! She looks so peaceful and in love under that striking moon. I like the way you introduce the reader into the haiku with the pronoun 'you.' Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Beautifully and hypnotically done! She looks so peaceful and in love under that striking moon. I like the way you introduce the reader into the haiku with the pronoun 'you.' Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊