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Devotion

Give All, Worship As You Need, To Many

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Rick,

Another fine poem. Your love for God shines through this poem. It pulls the reader in and lets us experience that love.

The only way to salvation is God. He gave his only begotten son to take away sins. That seems harsh, but God knew what he was doing when he did that. That's why we have everlasting life if we follow God's way.

Well done my friend,

Cecilia

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Beautiful thoughts that we should all think about and use in our lives with our family and those we connect with. Thanks for sharing.Great work!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

Comment from Peter Jarvis
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This poem beautifully conveys the themes of devotion, faith, and service to others. Each stanza highlights different aspects of living a life of dedication--whether it's through connecting with the divine, supporting those around you, or being there for your family. The message of treating all with love and respect, as if they were Jesus reincarnated, is particularly powerful and resonates deeply.

Your words inspire a sense of purpose and encourage readers to embrace their spiritual and communal responsibilities.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    I try, been blessed and give my thanks to my Creator and the teachings of Jesus. Give yourself to others, they will give you love back.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Some very wise thoughts, Rick. You reflect a lot on God and family, all very admirable. I agree on sacrifice for your family. It's hard to do, sometimes. You get caught up in your own life and goals, forgetting the commitment needed for the people you love.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    We are to give attention to those in our world. Understand their wants and needs as you need the same from them. Be devoted to them and most important be devoted to yourself.