Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

omg me too! love a guy with soft long hair!

this was a great naani -- and it has rhyme, too!
cool theme and imagery
smooth flow and rhyme
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

And I have a thing for women with long dark hair. Lol. Well, the picture and your words tell me this is Jesus to which they refer. While know one actually knows how he looked, he most likely had long hair.
Beautiful depiction. Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

You are right, it's about Jesus when he was a man, although he was holy and deeply spiritual.

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 17-Dec-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I don't blame you:)) Your naani says it all fluently with passion and sweet longing. All said succinctly in 23 syllables. You've got excellent taste, Gypsy! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The passion we feel for our lover is like no other and our heart aches with the joy and pain of love, you captured the sentiment here perfectly, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for the additional information on the naani form. I knew it was from Telegu as I had a Telugu speaking boss decades ago. I think that picture reminds me of Heather Knight's favorite heavy metal singer!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Hehe, yes Heather and I share that in common.
Thank you very much 😊
❤️ Marival