Back Home
A Short Rhymed Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Back Home, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that we can wander away, but the love of God will always leave a light on for our return.
  |
This poem, Back Home, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that we can wander away, but the love of God will always leave a light on for our return.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
Our heavenly father does have a plan for each one of us and we need to be quiet and be still to Understand what that plan is that he has for us I enjoyed your poem very much and it flows very well when you read it is red aloud. Patricia.
|
Our heavenly father does have a plan for each one of us and we need to be quiet and be still to Understand what that plan is that he has for us I enjoyed your poem very much and it flows very well when you read it is red aloud. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely poem, dear Debra. We all think we can plan our own future, but we soon realise it's not that simple. There is only one way, and that is with God's help. I think He knows a little bit more that we do! Lol. Beautiful poem, my friend. Love and hugs Sandra xx
|
What a lovely poem, dear Debra. We all think we can plan our own future, but we soon realise it's not that simple. There is only one way, and that is with God's help. I think He knows a little bit more that we do! Lol. Beautiful poem, my friend. Love and hugs Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I know that scripture tells me that man makes his own plans, but God guides his feet. God's plan for our lives is a perfect one, the minute we think ours is better, we fool ourselves, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
|
Oh yes, I know that scripture tells me that man makes his own plans, but God guides his feet. God's plan for our lives is a perfect one, the minute we think ours is better, we fool ourselves, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very sweet and well-crafted little prayer about straying from the path and then finding your way back again with trust and gratitude, inspired by faith. A lovely club entry! Welcome back, Debra. Warm wishes Debbie xx
|
This is a very sweet and well-crafted little prayer about straying from the path and then finding your way back again with trust and gratitude, inspired by faith. A lovely club entry! Welcome back, Debra. Warm wishes Debbie xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debra.
-It is good to see you.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-A good second verse shows how
you tried things your way, but
there were "unforeseen troubles."
-A very good closing verse about
finding "your way back home.
-Very well done.
-One small thing: On my PC, the
last two verses are in a smaller size
font than the first verse.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
|
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debra.
-It is good to see you.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-A good second verse shows how
you tried things your way, but
there were "unforeseen troubles."
-A very good closing verse about
finding "your way back home.
-Very well done.
-One small thing: On my PC, the
last two verses are in a smaller size
font than the first verse.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
-
Hello Pam :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback and for the breakdown.
I wonder why the font size looks smaller in verses 2&3...I will go back to have a look what has happened, thank you for the heads up.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
-
You are very welcome, Debra. Do you use a computer to post?
