This Easter Morn
Free Verse: Along a North Carolina woodland path97 total reviews
Comment from writerjen
Heartfelt spiritual poem about God and how you have sensed his presence in your life. I liked your descriptive language. You expressed your emotions, the reader could feel your anger, happiness or rage as you described these situations. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Heartfelt spiritual poem about God and how you have sensed his presence in your life. I liked your descriptive language. You expressed your emotions, the reader could feel your anger, happiness or rage as you described these situations. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Good Morning, Friend!
I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
diane
Comment from Marisela Contona
I like this. it flows nicely. You have good word choses, and a great style. Keep writing, you have the skill. I look forward to more of your work.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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I like this. it flows nicely. You have good word choses, and a great style. Keep writing, you have the skill. I look forward to more of your work.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Marisela!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, strong and thought
provoking. Thank you for the amazing author's notes. The artwork is
perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, strong and thought
provoking. Thank you for the amazing author's notes. The artwork is
perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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So pleased you enjoyed, harmony13.
I just wanted to share this again...
Many thanks,
diane
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh Diane, as I read this I was thinking "I hope this is a contest entry to the Spiritual poem contest" - I see it is not. It should have been. It is the most beautiful example of spirituality I have read. You acknowledge everything that is beautiful and things that are not, are all the hand of a spiritual Maker. His design is in everything we see and do, and you have written the most lovely example of this. A well deserved six. Regards Dorothy xx
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Oh Diane, as I read this I was thinking "I hope this is a contest entry to the Spiritual poem contest" - I see it is not. It should have been. It is the most beautiful example of spirituality I have read. You acknowledge everything that is beautiful and things that are not, are all the hand of a spiritual Maker. His design is in everything we see and do, and you have written the most lovely example of this. A well deserved six. Regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Hello Dorothy,
I am very honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
No, I wrote this poem in 2007, but it is one of my favorites, and I just felt the need to share it.
I am so pleased it resonated with you.
Happy Easter!
diane
Comment from Dean Kuch
Such a beautiful, well rendered poem, Diane.
This one truly came from your heart--I can tell.
Funny how we're able to discern what is perceived by us as pretentious and what feels real, and true.
I've no doubt that what you have so wonderfully penned here is true.
And I, for one, could not agree with you more.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Such a beautiful, well rendered poem, Diane.
This one truly came from your heart--I can tell.
Funny how we're able to discern what is perceived by us as pretentious and what feels real, and true.
I've no doubt that what you have so wonderfully penned here is true.
And I, for one, could not agree with you more.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Hello Dean,
I wrote this poem in 2007 - while on the trip that I describe - definitely from the heart.
Thank you for appreciating my words...I just felt the need to share...
And thank you for your exceptional rating!
diane
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You're very welcome, Diane.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment from frogbook
This is a superb tribute to you relationship with the Lord. Mine is not always perfect either but I need him more in the bad times. I loved this and thought it the absolute best of all the spiritual poems I have seen lately. Extremely impressive.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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This is a superb tribute to you relationship with the Lord. Mine is not always perfect either but I need him more in the bad times. I loved this and thought it the absolute best of all the spiritual poems I have seen lately. Extremely impressive.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
I am honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
Humbled by your words...
I wrote this offering in 2007, but I just felt a need to share once again...
Diane
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Excellence. This is a beauty. You show that we are not always in God's good graces nor HE in ours. I like the raw honesty of that. Creative. Honest. Unique. Raw. Great job with this. Good Luck! Loved it!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Excellence. This is a beauty. You show that we are not always in God's good graces nor HE in ours. I like the raw honesty of that. Creative. Honest. Unique. Raw. Great job with this. Good Luck! Loved it!
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Dear Wendy Aune,
I am so very honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
I wrote this piece in 2007. It was very cathartic for me then, and I just felt the need to share for today's readers...
So pleased it resonated with you...
Happy Easter...
diane
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Someone told me that God won't chase you if you turn away from Him. I disagree. He chased me when I was off doing my own thing. I completely agree with you. He never lets us go, we may stray, but He's always there
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Someone told me that God won't chase you if you turn away from Him. I disagree. He chased me when I was off doing my own thing. I completely agree with you. He never lets us go, we may stray, but He's always there
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend!
So pleased you enjoyed!
This is one of my favorites = writing in 2007.
Blessings to you and yours!
diane
Comment from tfawcus
The different ways in which we interact with the Almighty, depending on the circumstances of our lives, is in stark contrast with His unswerving love and this comes across very strongly in your poem. Wishing you a very happy Easter too!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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The different ways in which we interact with the Almighty, depending on the circumstances of our lives, is in stark contrast with His unswerving love and this comes across very strongly in your poem. Wishing you a very happy Easter too!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
This is one of my favorite poems. I penned it in 2007, but felt the need to share once again.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Always,
diane
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yes it sounds like you're not a stranger to God. I'm thankful that He looks at the heart and not everything we say or do. David was a murderer and an adulterer and yet, what did the Lord say about him? He said that he was a man after His own heart. I guess it's good that God didn't see all of his outward baggage to judge him by. The master probes deeper. He saw something else there. I like this. I like the message of faith and how inspirational this is. Well done Ms. KT.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Yes it sounds like you're not a stranger to God. I'm thankful that He looks at the heart and not everything we say or do. David was a murderer and an adulterer and yet, what did the Lord say about him? He said that he was a man after His own heart. I guess it's good that God didn't see all of his outward baggage to judge him by. The master probes deeper. He saw something else there. I like this. I like the message of faith and how inspirational this is. Well done Ms. KT.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hello Jeffrey,
I penned this verse in 2007. But I felt the need to post it once again.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review...
Always,
diane