Unchained
almost didn't make it...33 total reviews
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi PUPA,
I'm glad you have been rescued from the depths of your despair, but you certainly produced an excellent poem as a result. I love this formation and enjoyed the read and the art is perfect for your words. You have expressed yourself very well with vivid imagery and the meaning clear. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2008
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Hi PUPA,
I'm glad you have been rescued from the depths of your despair, but you certainly produced an excellent poem as a result. I love this formation and enjoyed the read and the art is perfect for your words. You have expressed yourself very well with vivid imagery and the meaning clear. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 15-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2008
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Thanks, mountaingal, I appreciate your kind comments about my formed poetry. I am starting to enjoy it. A new one is on the way.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Just2Write
Very nicely done, Pupa. Your poem flowed beautifully and the form was perfect. Nothing to fix or change here. This poem was exceptional.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008
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Very nicely done, Pupa. Your poem flowed beautifully and the form was perfect. Nothing to fix or change here. This poem was exceptional.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008
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Oh my sweet friend, you are very generous and I thank you from all my heart.
This means a lot to me.
Love
Pupa
Comment from jeana
I could relate 100% with you words and thoughts Those up and down can be devastating. You have captured them equisitely my dear friend and boy does this hit home. I am so glad to here you have struggled through. jeana
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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I could relate 100% with you words and thoughts Those up and down can be devastating. You have captured them equisitely my dear friend and boy does this hit home. I am so glad to here you have struggled through. jeana
Comment Written 12-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Jeana, you are very generous my friend. Thanks a million for the stars and great review. I guess we have to keep trying to get through the struggle though is is very exhausting.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PUPA, I'm so glad you finally let go of your loads of despair. Excellent poem showing us how the things in life that cause us miserable thoughts can drag us down
Good work.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008
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Hello PUPA, I'm so glad you finally let go of your loads of despair. Excellent poem showing us how the things in life that cause us miserable thoughts can drag us down
Good work.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008
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Thanks again for your thoughts on this poem, Gert.
Love
Pupa
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Your Welcome PUPA
smiles
Gert
Comment from Sylvia Page
Pupa this is lovely. I love the way you have shaped this. It is very appropriate and blends very well with the hackles and chain.
cannot breath[e ?]
Happy writing
Sylvia
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Pupa this is lovely. I love the way you have shaped this. It is very appropriate and blends very well with the hackles and chain.
cannot breath[e ?]
Happy writing
Sylvia
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Hi Sylvia, thanks for your continueoud support.
To breathe is with an e, yes, you are absolutely right. I even looked it up because I had it without an e and doubted it! Then forgot to correct it...haha, Thank you so much for spotting it, dearest friend.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Norzah
Giving shape and form to the verbal expression of feelings and emotions
is the work of the artist and you have expressed you ups and downs most beautifully. It can take the shape of the human mouth shouting with anger, crying or pleading. Turned horizontally it can be a bell-shape graph or a dip
and rising curve. One other form that it suggests to me is my secret, Love the poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Giving shape and form to the verbal expression of feelings and emotions
is the work of the artist and you have expressed you ups and downs most beautifully. It can take the shape of the human mouth shouting with anger, crying or pleading. Turned horizontally it can be a bell-shape graph or a dip
and rising curve. One other form that it suggests to me is my secret, Love the poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Oh Norzah, now I am dying to know!! lol. Thanks my friend for your encouraging review and great observation.
I always appreciate your comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a nicely written shape poem, Pupa. I like the way the shape of the poem echoes your feelings, dwindling down to nothing and then becoming alive again. I'm glad you are feeling better.
Sally
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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This is a nicely written shape poem, Pupa. I like the way the shape of the poem echoes your feelings, dwindling down to nothing and then becoming alive again. I'm glad you are feeling better.
Sally
Comment Written 10-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thanks Sally, I appreciate your encouraging comments and kind feelings.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Wendyanne
HI PUPA yes I can definitely relate to your words at the moment. You have described the feeling well. Let's hope it passes soon
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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HI PUPA yes I can definitely relate to your words at the moment. You have described the feeling well. Let's hope it passes soon
Comment Written 10-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Thanks Wendyanne, I know you know that feeling. Yes, let's hope for better days to come.
Love
Pupa
Comment from mildredmolanki
Hi I enjoyed your poem. It flows very nicely with some good use of imagery. I don't usually like to read poetry that is set out is such unconventional ways...I often find it pretentious..however in this case I enjoyed it and felt it worked very well with the subject of your poem. Kind regards.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Hi I enjoyed your poem. It flows very nicely with some good use of imagery. I don't usually like to read poetry that is set out is such unconventional ways...I often find it pretentious..however in this case I enjoyed it and felt it worked very well with the subject of your poem. Kind regards.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Hi Mildred, I am glad you liked my poem, thanks for an encouraging review and kind rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Rajasir
This typographical poem of yours is a wonderful example of creativity where pessimism is transformed into optimism and survival at last. It is really a very meaningful and beautiful poem.
Bless you,
Rajasir
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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This typographical poem of yours is a wonderful example of creativity where pessimism is transformed into optimism and survival at last. It is really a very meaningful and beautiful poem.
Bless you,
Rajasir
Comment Written 10-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008
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Rajasir, your review is very encouraging, thank you. I am glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa