Rose Bud
Poem on feeling emotions18 total reviews
Comment from deb552
Your writing is keeping me busy, but in a good way. Everything you say rings so true to me. It's not easy for me to put myself out there and allow people to really know me. I think part of that has to do with the fact that I don't really know me, but I'm working on that. This whole poem, thoughts and picture flow together beautifully and make for very good read. More thoughts for me to ponder.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Your writing is keeping me busy, but in a good way. Everything you say rings so true to me. It's not easy for me to put myself out there and allow people to really know me. I think part of that has to do with the fact that I don't really know me, but I'm working on that. This whole poem, thoughts and picture flow together beautifully and make for very good read. More thoughts for me to ponder.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for your review. I found myself after my accident.You will get to know yourself sometime. Keep writing. It is very therapeutic. Debbie
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Writing is helping. Thanks
Comment from AnnaLinda
dejohnsrld,
This is really a unique poem - well composed and
it conveys your message so profoundly. I enjoyed
reading it and found each section to hold the
steps and timidity that we all sometimes feel.
These lines seemed to stand out to me:
"Rose bud
You are valued
Unlock your petals
Reveal the beauty within"
Great way to end your poem,
Linda
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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dejohnsrld,
This is really a unique poem - well composed and
it conveys your message so profoundly. I enjoyed
reading it and found each section to hold the
steps and timidity that we all sometimes feel.
These lines seemed to stand out to me:
"Rose bud
You are valued
Unlock your petals
Reveal the beauty within"
Great way to end your poem,
Linda
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Debbie
Comment from Ann Smith
I like the metaphor of the rose bud. It so perfectly describes the cycles of life and the emotions that are held inside. I like the format. It's simple and delicate just like the flower you write about. I especially like the last two lines, 'unlock your petals Reveal the beauty within.' ann
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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I like the metaphor of the rose bud. It so perfectly describes the cycles of life and the emotions that are held inside. I like the format. It's simple and delicate just like the flower you write about. I especially like the last two lines, 'unlock your petals Reveal the beauty within.' ann
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for your review. Debbie
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
Wow! I'm going to ride this train to glory. What an astounding ray of sunshine's delievered exquisite unbounging truth. We all love roses, don't we?
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Wow! I'm going to ride this train to glory. What an astounding ray of sunshine's delievered exquisite unbounging truth. We all love roses, don't we?
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! Debbie
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excellent!
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two typos in the review, I see. but the essence was there, my friend!
Comment from quashdog
Rose bud as a metaphor for a young woman who is starting her social life perhaps. Good poem I really liked it. The poem can be translated as a physical or emotional opening of a young girl's mind/body.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Rose bud as a metaphor for a young woman who is starting her social life perhaps. Good poem I really liked it. The poem can be translated as a physical or emotional opening of a young girl's mind/body.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the review. Debbie
Comment from Victorian Lady
This is very unique and a lovely poem! I enjoyed how you wove the imagery of the folded flower with thoughts of a person being inside a shell. This gives a sense of peace and comfort, when you say:
No reason not
To spread your petals
Enjoy life
...I like how your words seem to gently coax someone's spirit out of hiding.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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This is very unique and a lovely poem! I enjoyed how you wove the imagery of the folded flower with thoughts of a person being inside a shell. This gives a sense of peace and comfort, when you say:
No reason not
To spread your petals
Enjoy life
...I like how your words seem to gently coax someone's spirit out of hiding.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the review. Glad you enjoyed it Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Reveal the beauty within ... sighhhhh. Now there's a statement with such poetic meaning. Love your repeated use of the words "rose bud'. Kinda keeps the reader knowing exactly what is being talked about. Just lovely, you!!!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Reveal the beauty within ... sighhhhh. Now there's a statement with such poetic meaning. Love your repeated use of the words "rose bud'. Kinda keeps the reader knowing exactly what is being talked about. Just lovely, you!!!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you for the lovely review. Debbie
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My pleasure sweet poet!!
Comment from l.raven
This is nicely written.I like the wording in this poem.And of course my favorite flower is the Rose.As a bud they arebeautiful.And as a open flower they are beautiful.very nice
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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This is nicely written.I like the wording in this poem.And of course my favorite flower is the Rose.As a bud they arebeautiful.And as a open flower they are beautiful.very nice
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you for the kind review. Debbie
Comment from 2twiqui
It makes me think of someone who has gone through some trauma or perhaps depression and is responding positively to loving encouragement from either a loved one or perhaps a psychologist. I love the metaphor of the rose for being withdrawn. Lovely.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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It makes me think of someone who has gone through some trauma or perhaps depression and is responding positively to loving encouragement from either a loved one or perhaps a psychologist. I love the metaphor of the rose for being withdrawn. Lovely.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you for the very kind review. Debbie
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this is a simple, uplifting poem that fits beautifully with the artwork you chose. i read it twice to absorb all the emotions and the message in it!.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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this is a simple, uplifting poem that fits beautifully with the artwork you chose. i read it twice to absorb all the emotions and the message in it!.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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I am glad that you liked this. Thank you for kind review