Spit
Determination - Free Verse28 total reviews
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Eww! Lol! I suppose most people have tried it once and forgot. I think your words flowed well, Gungalo. What else can I say... It's nice.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
Eww! Lol! I suppose most people have tried it once and forgot. I think your words flowed well, Gungalo. What else can I say... It's nice.
Isaiah
Comment Written 16-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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It's bubble fun!!!! LOL, MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Thanks you.
Comment from annie-angel
This poem was like being drawn into a moment suspended in time. Everything but the boy, the spit, the finger, the bubble - didn't even exist. I felt myself holding my breath with the child. I am definitely going to share this one with my grandson - a good spit bubble never got past him!! great write, my friend. annie
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
This poem was like being drawn into a moment suspended in time. Everything but the boy, the spit, the finger, the bubble - didn't even exist. I felt myself holding my breath with the child. I am definitely going to share this one with my grandson - a good spit bubble never got past him!! great write, my friend. annie
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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LOL I more envisioned a big bubble you blow and then try to stick your finger into it without breaking the bubble and the only way to do that is to spit on your finger and make it all wet. Bet he knows!!! Thanks so much you!!!
Comment from missy98writer
Girl,
what a fun and delightful free verse. I love it when the bubble burst. Your art work is lovely. Kind of sensual in a nasty sort of way. I hate spitting because it's nasty. A creative free verse.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
Girl,
what a fun and delightful free verse. I love it when the bubble burst. Your art work is lovely. Kind of sensual in a nasty sort of way. I hate spitting because it's nasty. A creative free verse.
Melissa.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Silly, you spit, wet your finger to put it inside the bubble. Not spit, like patooooey. MUAHHHHHHH. Thanks you!!
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Silly, you spit, wet your finger to put it inside the bubble. Not spit, like patooooey. MUAHHHHHHH. Thanks you!!
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Gungalo:
People who have never tried this:
a. don't know what they're missing
b. don't know that it takes real talent to accomplish it
c. pay money to watch someone do the exact same thing with balloons
go figure
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
Gungalo:
People who have never tried this:
a. don't know what they're missing
b. don't know that it takes real talent to accomplish it
c. pay money to watch someone do the exact same thing with balloons
go figure
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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LOL just love you and man what a great review. Pay money, eh? LOL. Thanks you for your wild and wonderful review.
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LOL just love you and man what a great review. Pay money, eh? LOL. Thanks you for your wild and wonderful review.
Comment from lishareading
How fun and true of something no one ever wants to admit to doing. You write so gracefully of something that most people have probably done in their lifetime more than once, but would rather die than say so, and I find it so new and exciting. So Shel Silverstein, but with much more grace.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
How fun and true of something no one ever wants to admit to doing. You write so gracefully of something that most people have probably done in their lifetime more than once, but would rather die than say so, and I find it so new and exciting. So Shel Silverstein, but with much more grace.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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LOL now that's a wonderful review you. Thanks so very much. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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LOL now that's a wonderful review you. Thanks so very much. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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Thank you so much; it was just so honest.
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Thank YOU girl!!!
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
Wow! what an artist you are; You have the ultimate gift of taking an unrefined unpleasant subject and turing it into masterful art! I lvoed this one...
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
Wow! what an artist you are; You have the ultimate gift of taking an unrefined unpleasant subject and turing it into masterful art! I lvoed this one...
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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LOL thanks you. Thought you might. Just love ya and your review!!!!!
Comment from Irene D. Garces
I have tried spitting many times already...on the road, on the chair, on the table...particularly anywhere. But, I think I have not tried what you are trying to describe...And I don't think I will be missing something I haven't tried...
Nice piece but too abstract to understand...
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
I have tried spitting many times already...on the road, on the chair, on the table...particularly anywhere. But, I think I have not tried what you are trying to describe...And I don't think I will be missing something I haven't tried...
Nice piece but too abstract to understand...
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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LOL Thank you girl for an awesome review. MUAHHHHHHHHHH.
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LOL. MUAHHHHHH
Comment from sizemore0409
Ha! That was fun! And don't tell anyone but, yes, I have done exactly that --- and it was GREAT! In fact, I'm going to do it right now!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
Ha! That was fun! And don't tell anyone but, yes, I have done exactly that --- and it was GREAT! In fact, I'm going to do it right now!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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LOL too funny!!! Bubbles are so much fun and can be quite testy!!! Thanks for a great review you!!!
Comment from sasil
I don't know what to say, except GROSS! Great visual (or not) of a man spitting--have to agree though, that it takes quite a bit of focus to aim spit. The word 'passion' in here makes me wonder if I'm missing something between the lines (I'm sure it's beautiful). Interesting approach to the subject "Determination"....fun!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
I don't know what to say, except GROSS! Great visual (or not) of a man spitting--have to agree though, that it takes quite a bit of focus to aim spit. The word 'passion' in here makes me wonder if I'm missing something between the lines (I'm sure it's beautiful). Interesting approach to the subject "Determination"....fun!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Silly poet, ya have to get yer finger wet before you can stick it into a bubble. Yer not spitting like you are thinking. Didn't you ever paly with bubbles? LOL. Thanks, but get the right vision of this okay? MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Comment from Writingfundimension
You've managed to make bursting a bubble quite erotic! What a great little poem - so very cleverly penned. You rock sister! Bev
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
You've managed to make bursting a bubble quite erotic! What a great little poem - so very cleverly penned. You rock sister! Bev
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much sweet girl for an awesome review. I can tell you like playing with bubbles too. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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You bet your sweet um....Hugs, Bev
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LOL MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!