Our marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Our wedding"Short book about how our marriage started.
16 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
No one ever told me to switch my engagement ring to my right hand the day of the wedding so the band could go on the inside. My engagement ring stays on the inside and band on the outside. I've always been opposite I guess. I had the big church wedding with dj. Our friend did our photos for us because she had a side business where she did it so we got a deal but I bet we spent way more than you. I won't lie. I'm glad I had the whole wedding thing but I'm also glad it's a once in a lifetime thing. I was exhausted that night.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
No one ever told me to switch my engagement ring to my right hand the day of the wedding so the band could go on the inside. My engagement ring stays on the inside and band on the outside. I've always been opposite I guess. I had the big church wedding with dj. Our friend did our photos for us because she had a side business where she did it so we got a deal but I bet we spent way more than you. I won't lie. I'm glad I had the whole wedding thing but I'm also glad it's a once in a lifetime thing. I was exhausted that night.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kid review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. I wished we had, but we had family and friends in two countries.
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I get that. They were there in spirit
Comment from Charlene0513
To robina1978,
This was a quick glance of your vows and the wonderful way you both received one another in the mist of winter time.
Your tradition of exchange of rings, I found very nice gesture.
Charlene
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
To robina1978,
This was a quick glance of your vows and the wonderful way you both received one another in the mist of winter time.
Your tradition of exchange of rings, I found very nice gesture.
Charlene
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review my friend. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an well written piece we have here, but there are some clumsy sentences as well
This one below:
"if my English skills were up to par - which they were in his opinion" "They" is usually a reference to people.
I would say "if my English skills were up to par - which in his opinion was confirmed,"
Other wise very good.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
This is an well written piece we have here, but there are some clumsy sentences as well
This one below:
"if my English skills were up to par - which they were in his opinion" "They" is usually a reference to people.
I would say "if my English skills were up to par - which in his opinion was confirmed,"
Other wise very good.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Thanks for the tip, will change accordingly. Is Cynthia being admitted tonight as the procedure is tomorrow?
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She had to be there as six this morning.
Yes I am a bit nervous but she is in good hands.
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Will keep my fingers crossed for the two of you. Surely you will still see her today. Please pass on our best regards, Ine
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Nice one, Ine! I am loving your candid telling of you and your husband's past. It's charming, and I look forward to the next. Hugs, Av.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
Nice one, Ine! I am loving your candid telling of you and your husband's past. It's charming, and I look forward to the next. Hugs, Av.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from Janie King
So, you were married in Holland and lived in Scotland..I've been to Amsterdam but I have not got to go to Scotland yet..I would love to some day. Good piece. God bless.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
So, you were married in Holland and lived in Scotland..I've been to Amsterdam but I have not got to go to Scotland yet..I would love to some day. Good piece. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine. I love this writing. You have a lovely way of
telling your story with a nice flow and very entertaining. I had to smile about the rings. It happened to me also once.
Not my wedding ring, but just a ring....
And that thing about the knifes... I saw it happening before my eyes. Things you never forget. Great write my friend. Liefs Fia
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
Hi Ine. I love this writing. You have a lovely way of
telling your story with a nice flow and very entertaining. I had to smile about the rings. It happened to me also once.
Not my wedding ring, but just a ring....
And that thing about the knifes... I saw it happening before my eyes. Things you never forget. Great write my friend. Liefs Fia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
awww, it all went smoothly, that's the
main thing, unlike my second marriage,
me missus buggered-off on our wedding
night and i saw no more of her for three
months! it's a long story, so i won't go
there. another splendiferous write,
Dutchess Ine. hope the next chapter's
not gonna be too informative! lol.
warmly, xxx, eph.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
awww, it all went smoothly, that's the
main thing, unlike my second marriage,
me missus buggered-off on our wedding
night and i saw no more of her for three
months! it's a long story, so i won't go
there. another splendiferous write,
Dutchess Ine. hope the next chapter's
not gonna be too informative! lol.
warmly, xxx, eph.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine. I will keep your tender soul in mind my Prince-LOL.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
I've enjoyed your story so far, robina. It always manages to keep me interested and wanting to read more. Nice job and good luck with future chapters. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
I've enjoyed your story so far, robina. It always manages to keep me interested and wanting to read more. Nice job and good luck with future chapters. Have a great day.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from amada
This is a very nice beginning to a successful marriage. God bless. The atmosphere of the wedding ceremony and cutting the steaks with a blunt knife! Great details.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
This is a very nice beginning to a successful marriage. God bless. The atmosphere of the wedding ceremony and cutting the steaks with a blunt knife! Great details.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from Joan E.
What an introduction to the Scottish language and what a start to being married with having your ring cut off! (In paragraph six, "clothes" lost its "e.") How clever of you to leave us in suspense about your honeymoon weekend! -Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
What an introduction to the Scottish language and what a start to being married with having your ring cut off! (In paragraph six, "clothes" lost its "e.") How clever of you to leave us in suspense about your honeymoon weekend! -Joan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine. Thanks, will correct.