Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Life is tough if you can't defend youself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an violent read. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011

Thank you for the review

reply by c_lucas on 24-Dec-2011

You're welcome.

Comment from rightforyou

Excellent

They would return later that night to try to fire bomb my parent's home but we figured they would try something again that night and were waiting with a 12 gauge and some pistols, which we fired off at them when we heard the cocktails hit the roof of the house around 10:00pm or so. We then had to mix it up with the "brothers" around this neighborhood for a bit after that.



I think that we were neighbors...Ron

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011

Thank you for the correction and kind words of encouragement

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Well written and interesting. You are starting to develop
your characters and to establish the story line. This has the potential to be a great story in my estimation!!! DEbbie

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011

Thank you for the review and encouragement.