Keep peace
A 5-7-5 poem, see foot note39 total reviews
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Ine
words hurt more than deeds
don't damage one with either
keep peace everywhere
These are powerful words you have penned. Once spoken, angry words can NEVER be taken back
Bear
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
Hey there Ine
words hurt more than deeds
don't damage one with either
keep peace everywhere
These are powerful words you have penned. Once spoken, angry words can NEVER be taken back
Bear
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is a great short poem with a very good message be kind to one another keep the peace well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
Yes my friend this is a great short poem with a very good message be kind to one another keep the peace well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from Glasstruth
True. Once you've said something. It can't be taken back. The memory holds that hurt hostage, and eventually its ugly head reappears. A nice little reminder on that we should all watch what we do, or say. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
True. Once you've said something. It can't be taken back. The memory holds that hurt hostage, and eventually its ugly head reappears. A nice little reminder on that we should all watch what we do, or say. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from barkingdog
This is a fine message to send in a 5/7/5 poem. It is clear and comes right to the point. We should be kind to each other and promote neighborly friendship and peace..
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
This is a fine message to send in a 5/7/5 poem. It is clear and comes right to the point. We should be kind to each other and promote neighborly friendship and peace..
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from beccabootie123
this is so true, you have wisdom and a verbal ability that makes me look forward to the writings you send out each day.
thank you for sharing this write today I needed it. adele
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
this is so true, you have wisdom and a verbal ability that makes me look forward to the writings you send out each day.
thank you for sharing this write today I needed it. adele
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from Joan E.
Yes, my mother used to say if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all! Thank you for reminding us in this 5-7-5 that words are powerful weapons. You even included alliteration. Peace! -Joan
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
Yes, my mother used to say if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all! Thank you for reminding us in this 5-7-5 that words are powerful weapons. You even included alliteration. Peace! -Joan
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely 5-7-5 poem with three syllables everywhere. Lovely photo too! Peace would, indeed, be wonderful if found everywhere. I agree, Deb
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
Lovely 5-7-5 poem with three syllables everywhere. Lovely photo too! Peace would, indeed, be wonderful if found everywhere. I agree, Deb
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for this lovely six, you made my day.
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
I skipped right over "everywhere" without missing a beat. But then your author notes compelled me to check syllable count myself cuz it SEEMS like maybe there could be a forth syllable in there...of course you were right all along.
The strength of this 5-7-5 transcends form. You are so correct... people need to be aware that words can cause hurt... intentionally or simply trough carelessness. Thank you for reminding us.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
I skipped right over "everywhere" without missing a beat. But then your author notes compelled me to check syllable count myself cuz it SEEMS like maybe there could be a forth syllable in there...of course you were right all along.
The strength of this 5-7-5 transcends form. You are so correct... people need to be aware that words can cause hurt... intentionally or simply trough carelessness. Thank you for reminding us.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from elgone
People cling to old ways and those thoughts are what cause conflict between people and groups of people. For there to ever be peace people must thing differently about what is important to them as individuals. They cannot allow their governments to rule them.
E
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
People cling to old ways and those thoughts are what cause conflict between people and groups of people. For there to ever be peace people must thing differently about what is important to them as individuals. They cannot allow their governments to rule them.
E
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Sunday, Ine. Thanks for this lovely six, you made my day!!
Comment from donaldww
Words hurt more than deeds sometimes, but I don't know if I'd rather someone hit me on the head with a stick.
Best to keep the peace.
Cheers, DW
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
Words hurt more than deeds sometimes, but I don't know if I'd rather someone hit me on the head with a stick.
Best to keep the peace.
Cheers, DW
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine.