Gum Trees-(5-7-5)
Trees are important to animals2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
A very huggable tree hugger! Unless, of course, you happen to be the Minister for Tourism as John Brown was when peed on and scratched by the koala he was cuddling for the cameras (c1985)! Cute picture and a great entry to the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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A very huggable tree hugger! Unless, of course, you happen to be the Minister for Tourism as John Brown was when peed on and scratched by the koala he was cuddling for the cameras (c1985)! Cute picture and a great entry to the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
This is potentially a very good 5-7-5. But to fulfil all the requirements of this limiting poetic discipline! However you have 6 syllables in the first line. Ko- a-a-3, bear -1hugs-1trees-1 = 6. The second and third are ok. Sorry, cheers, Roy.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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This is potentially a very good 5-7-5. But to fulfil all the requirements of this limiting poetic discipline! However you have 6 syllables in the first line. Ko- a-a-3, bear -1hugs-1trees-1 = 6. The second and third are ok. Sorry, cheers, Roy.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thanks-I'll double check again
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Ko-1a-1la-1=3
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I have checked again and your correct. Thank you for your review. I dropped a word.
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It's terrible when that happens, I'm on your side. Good luck. Roy.