Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is lovely. I can see why it is a winner. You never cease to impress me. Brilliant work, really very well done. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014

Thank you for the lovely review and wishes. This is my first win, and after this, I won the Septolet poem contest, too.
I appreciate your support, dear friend. :)

Comment from Ridley Williams

Exceptional

Hello Anupam,
Congratulations on this splendid 5-7-5...and a contest winner, also...nice job! You used such wonderful words to describe the miracle of Spring...the senses were delighted. We've planted tons of wild flowers in our back yard, and I can only hope they will resemble that lovely picture. Brilliant work, my friend, really well done. All my best, Bill

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Hi, Bill.

Thank you for the generous stars and your lovely comments. This is my first prompt win. Glad you enjoyed this.

You are really so lucky to be living in a beautiful place. The experiences you share here really frame such lively scenes in my mind. I hope all's well on your side. :)

Warm regards,
Anupam

Comment from JudyS

Excellent

Anupam, What an interesting and wonderful poem. You say so much in so few words. I love the artwork you put with it as well. It reminds me of springtime in Alaska. I miss living there sometimes. Super job on this one. Have a good one, Judy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for another lovely review. Glad you enjoyed this one. I appreciate your comments. :)

Comment from SueZen

Good

Poem evokes so much, the music in all new, spring's magic.
Content beautiful, but flow (sound) of words less 'musical', bit 'choppy', i.e. in my view.
Suggestion to improve:

spring's musical muse (or: inspiring muse)
regenerates dormant life
luscious hues chant hymn

Please don't feel as negative criticism, merely as honest (re)view from reader.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you for changing the poem.

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Well done, lovely presentation and the syllable count is
perfect. I enjoyed that :Springs musical breath, resurrects frozen life forms. Isn't that the truth. And those beautiful flowers melt the heart. :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

Comment from donaldcolson

Excellent

Good 3 liner to fit with format. But it is a bit too simple for my taste. No mystery. Then I can't follow how hues chant. Still it is pretty good for 5-7-5 don

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you for reading. I don't write to impress a particular person.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Anupam, my this is just beautiful...Spring does bring out everything that is beautiful in life....I love your poem...and your picture and colors are stunning...

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you for this lovely review. :)

reply by l.raven on 27-Apr-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from dinobi

Good

Brilliant write that conforms to the 5-7-5 spring prompts...the language was simple and fascinating...I could not hold any shortcomings...well done.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thanks

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

I love the musical theme here, also the soft hues of the photo you chose to go with it makes it a perfect match. Great entry in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you for this lovely review. :)

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Beautiful presentation. Your syllable count is definitely on target. Beautiful imagery. "Frozen life forms" sounds a little too "Star Trek" for my taste, but I'm sure it'll go over with the voters. You carry out the musical theme with "musical breath" and "chant hymn." Lovely artwork choice to complement your spring song. judi

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for this lovely review. :)

reply by judiverse on 27-Apr-2014

You're so welcome. judi