Lord, Help Me Wait On You
Learning to wait upon the Lord.15 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
Hi Pat, boy I really like this. Be thankful while waiting for more blessings!! Yes!! And as you bless us, let us share our blessings with others. Very well done. Thank you Lord. God bless you, my friend. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
Hi Pat, boy I really like this. Be thankful while waiting for more blessings!! Yes!! And as you bless us, let us share our blessings with others. Very well done. Thank you Lord. God bless you, my friend. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Thanks Miss Sally for the nice review.
Comment from misscookie
I say those words so many times.
I keep saying I only have to say them once. for He knows my heart.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
I say those words so many times.
I keep saying I only have to say them once. for He knows my heart.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the review. Have a good weekend Miss Cookie.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Patricia. This is another very well written and heartfelt piece mate. Patience is one of the most important things for us Christians to practice. I really enjoyed this my friend, Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
G'day Patricia. This is another very well written and heartfelt piece mate. Patience is one of the most important things for us Christians to practice. I really enjoyed this my friend, Cheers Fez
Comment Written 22-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Thanks Fez for the review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Hi Patricia, this is a nice prayer poem. I think this would have made a good triolet poem. Have you ever tried that form? they are fun and work well in faith poems.
Teresa
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
Hi Patricia, this is a nice prayer poem. I think this would have made a good triolet poem. Have you ever tried that form? they are fun and work well in faith poems.
Teresa
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the review, Teresa. I have written a couple of triolets, but it is not my favorite form. I am finding I am just liking free verse the most . I used to rhyme a lot and can still rhyme and do on occasion.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Pat,
Nice twist with the clock and waiting on the Lord. Nice presentation.
Hope your eye keeps improving. Sounds as if you're doing better with this one better than the last one, as far as goes. Good.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
Hi, Pat,
Nice twist with the clock and waiting on the Lord. Nice presentation.
Hope your eye keeps improving. Sounds as if you're doing better with this one better than the last one, as far as goes. Good.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much for the nice review. As for the eye, so far so good, I am pleased.
Comment from gypsycaravan
I really like the thought of being a blessing to others instead of always waiting to receive blessings. That feels doubly good. I really like this one, Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
I really like the thought of being a blessing to others instead of always waiting to receive blessings. That feels doubly good. I really like this one, Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the review I have always had a spirit of giving more than receiving.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Perfectly done.
Nice emotion and flow.
Good words that everyone should be able to relate to.
Pleas that mean everything to the Christian trying to stay on the right track
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
Perfectly done.
Nice emotion and flow.
Good words that everyone should be able to relate to.
Pleas that mean everything to the Christian trying to stay on the right track
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thank you Barb for a nice review, Most of the poetry I write preaches to me before I write then after I write it.
Comment from MelB
A wonderful poem on blessings. If we focus on being a blessing to others, we will in turn receive many blessings. So thankful for His goodness. A very uplifting message you have penned here.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
A wonderful poem on blessings. If we focus on being a blessing to others, we will in turn receive many blessings. So thankful for His goodness. A very uplifting message you have penned here.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks Melissa. Got one coming tonight that I wrote in less than 5 minutes and like it very much. it is called broken and Spilled out and did art to go with it. Patricia
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I look forward to reading it. I may post another chapter of book tonight. I have been fixing the last 2 chapters, after all the suggestions I am getting. This writing a book thing is hard!
Comment from meggie13
This a prayer of supplication. The Lord is always on time; His time is not our time.It's good to depend on the Lord , He never disappoints us. The picture used is a good match for your poem. When we receive His blessings we should share with others.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
This a prayer of supplication. The Lord is always on time; His time is not our time.It's good to depend on the Lord , He never disappoints us. The picture used is a good match for your poem. When we receive His blessings we should share with others.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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Thanks Meggie for the nice review. I was indeed written as a prayer for provision as I have waited a long time for the blessing of healing for my vision. The left eye is now better than it has been in 5 years, but the right eye is not as well.
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Sorry to hear about your eyes. I do not how you can write. Is it cataracts or glaucoma. An operation messed up my left eye.
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I have suffered for almost 6 years with macular degeneration and just had surgery on both eyes for cataracts right eye Jan 7th left eye Feb 19
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There is some kind of machine to help with macular degeneration . You review and write and that has to be hard on them . Do not try to force your eyes .
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I do read and review quite a lot, but through the day I will take an hour every 3 hours and completely rest my eye and even sleep a bit.
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I am glad to hear that. The Lord needs you to spread his word which you do through your writing. Blessings.
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I know He wants me to write and share, so I trust Him to care for my eyes. he has saved my sight to this point, 6 years ago I could not see a persons face with my left eye, it was just as black blank spot, now with treatment I can see the pupils in a persons eyes with the left eye. The right eye had a hole in the macula and they tried to fill it, but I still have a bit of a wave in the center field of vision in the eye.
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I think you are very special and He will take care of you. He said that He will never forsake you. Blessings!
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There is some kind of machine to help with macular degeneration . You review and write and that has to be hard on them . Do not try to force your eyes .
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I do try to rest me eyes throughout the day.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This is an excellent prayer and poem. This speaks volumes of insight into you as a person. Well done. I like this one very much. Have a wonderful day. Bruce.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
This is an excellent prayer and poem. This speaks volumes of insight into you as a person. Well done. I like this one very much. Have a wonderful day. Bruce.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2015
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thanks for the nice review. I wrote this as a prayer as I have been waiting healing of my eyes.