Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Questions"My book of poems and stories
20 total reviews
Comment from Wabigoon
Annie--
This doesn't do it for me. Thought maybe I don't know what you are trying to do? In such a short form it is hard to know. But, I, in such a short form look for an open ending. Like you have a diligent student sitting there diligently studying and if it was my poem when I got to the last line I would use something like:
"Thought provoking
cliches"
Because my feel is you mean to mock the education system, though maybe I'm wrong?
So, let me know how much I'm wrong!
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Annie--
This doesn't do it for me. Thought maybe I don't know what you are trying to do? In such a short form it is hard to know. But, I, in such a short form look for an open ending. Like you have a diligent student sitting there diligently studying and if it was my poem when I got to the last line I would use something like:
"Thought provoking
cliches"
Because my feel is you mean to mock the education system, though maybe I'm wrong?
So, let me know how much I'm wrong!
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Well I am at a loss here to explain because I am thoroughly confused as to what I am doing and what kinds of poetry there are. I can say I was not trying to mock any system but try to stay within the stated guidelines for the contest and say something intelligent enough not to be laughed at. I have written for years but just my own "stuff" and now I am learning some form for doing it.
I cannot tell you enough how much I appreciate your time and comments. It is people like you who help people like me to learn and grow. I thank you sincerely.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent ABC form that shows how an inquisitive mind can expand. Stimulating the mind to induce is a wonderful line that is so true, questions can lead to answers and an active mind.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Excellent ABC form that shows how an inquisitive mind can expand. Stimulating the mind to induce is a wonderful line that is so true, questions can lead to answers and an active mind.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you sincerely for your comments. I know it takes time to review and I appreciate the time.
Comment from bard owl
This is a super contest entry to the ABC Poetry Contest. And you are so right. Challenging the minds of children is so important. That is why dedicated teachers are so needed in our schools and universities. Best of luck to you. Blessings too, Linda
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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This is a super contest entry to the ABC Poetry Contest. And you are so right. Challenging the minds of children is so important. That is why dedicated teachers are so needed in our schools and universities. Best of luck to you. Blessings too, Linda
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the stars and your complimentary review. I do appreciate the time reviewers take to do this. Thanks again.
Comment from Domino 2
Not an easy choice of letters to produce this excellent 'ABC' poem.
Top choice of apt. and intelligent words to reflect the theme.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Not an easy choice of letters to produce this excellent 'ABC' poem.
Top choice of apt. and intelligent words to reflect the theme.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your comments and the time you took to review my entry.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a cleverly thought-out ABC poem! I was going to hazard a guess and say you are either a teacher or a student, but you beat me to the punch, I see - you've named your target market. Great work! (So maybe you are neither, but an Advertising and Marketing whizz. :0)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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What a cleverly thought-out ABC poem! I was going to hazard a guess and say you are either a teacher or a student, but you beat me to the punch, I see - you've named your target market. Great work! (So maybe you are neither, but an Advertising and Marketing whizz. :0)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments. Your time is very much appreciated.
Comment from benoenose
The title makes the poem what that actually means. The poem is impressive for those of college and school level children/youths to develop questions that make them more and more involved within the subject. More of those who struggle in life with more questions do get ideas to overcome when answering questions.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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The title makes the poem what that actually means. The poem is impressive for those of college and school level children/youths to develop questions that make them more and more involved within the subject. More of those who struggle in life with more questions do get ideas to overcome when answering questions.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the time you have taken to review my poem. I appreciate it.
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
All books are thought provoking, the questions are necessary to understand what we have read and retained. It's an incentive to explore the world, learn more and sometimes question why we did not read more. The picture is perfect. Terrie
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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All books are thought provoking, the questions are necessary to understand what we have read and retained. It's an incentive to explore the world, learn more and sometimes question why we did not read more. The picture is perfect. Terrie
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind words and the time you took to review my poem.
Comment from RahulChadha
It is wonderful how you have expressed so many deep things in such small words. It is really impressive, and also very creative. Good luck for future.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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It is wonderful how you have expressed so many deep things in such small words. It is really impressive, and also very creative. Good luck for future.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This could apply to elementary or college age.
Questions
by AnnieDawn
I like your ABC poem for this contest. I think it's a good entry and you have a good chance of winning.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
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This could apply to elementary or college age.
Questions
by AnnieDawn
I like your ABC poem for this contest. I think it's a good entry and you have a good chance of winning.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate the time you take for reviewing.
Comment from Joan E.
The artwork you selected established the mood well for this "thought-provoking" ABC poem. Asking good questions is key to the learning process. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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The artwork you selected established the mood well for this "thought-provoking" ABC poem. Asking good questions is key to the learning process. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate the time you take for reviewing. Thanks again.