Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Endearing poem--could be for a creature or figuratively for a human. Tricky rhyme scheme--well done. Met the word count as well.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

what a clever little poem well done I liked the strong message in you well chosen words, good image to boot good luck in the prompt Cheers Christineð???

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

so few words to say and mean so much...get up and do something...don't just sit there and not try...very well written...and I love the picture

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you for your wonderful review.

reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2015

Hi Jaded, you are so very welcome...luff xxoo

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I think this poem is one of the best responses to this prompt that I've read. It is wise and sensible and has excellent rhymes. It is great advice and I liked everything about it. I wish you many votes in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for a great review.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hi..Now this is inspirational too me..I'm thinking its the butterfly talking to the young man to get out there and take charge..This is a solid entry. Cheers.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.

Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson

Excellent

What a lovely reminder not to sit and wallow in self-pity. Your poem is so wonderful. It reaches down and touches your reader. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.

Comment from LeslieP5

Excellent

Very good advice in this 1-6-1 poem - "don't sit home and cry - try!" This poem also works with the first and last words reversed. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you so much.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Good job with the syllable count. The meaning of your 1/6/1 poem is adorable and makes perfect sense. Good picture too.
~gypsy

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.

Comment from Amy Greta

Excellent

I really like this short and inspirational 1-6-1 poem! Not a whole lot of one syllable words rhyme enough to make a meaningful statement, but you managed to find three that do and put them together to encourage one to socialize in leu of being a home body. Nicely crafted!
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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thank you for your review.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

I like the plain and simple message of this poem. It teaches a great Life lesson in only eight words. Great matching artwork. Good job!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks so much.