Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the song. It is romantic. If you are with me is a nice thread throughout the song. Great work.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your love song and its repeats for emphasis. (I think line three in the refrain lost a couple of letters in "Are" and "and".) VMargarite's artwork is the perfect accompaniment. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

A sweet romantic love song, Ine, written by heart and soul.
Yes it's beautiful when you can share everything with your lover, for better and worse.You expressed your feelings so well. Fia

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This is an enjoyable poem to read regarding companionship with a good person, one whom we love.
Typo:
Ar you standing still ad life can give you no more
ArE you standing still aNd life can give you no more

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, robina, you did an excellent job writing this song about the love that makes everything complete. I spotted a couple of errors on one line--should be If you are with me, this can last so very long.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

This is the third time I've tried to write to you about your song lyric. The other two times it just floated away. ) ; Anyway I said it was nice and the picture you used with it is great too. In the third line you have ar and ad. Should they be are, and? In the third line in the verse after the refrain it says: his can last o very long. Should it be so?

Kat

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

reply by MizKat on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks Ine. We've been having rain, rain, and more rain. Not much fun especially since I lost the keys to my van and can't go anywhere. Kat

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose for your poem it is a perfect match.
I love the many hues surrounding the lovers.
Yes I could sense the passion with in your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

reply by misscookie on 30-Oct-2015

You're very welcome.
Have a blessed week end.
Cookie

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Lovely sentiment, Robina and I hope that both you and your husband continue your remarkable journey together. It was a good choice ;)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very nice song lyric, I think. It expresses the oneness of two people who love each other and are glad to be together. What everyone wants to experience. There are a few typos in your post. Suggest giving a look and correcting those. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Deborah Marie

Exceptional

Nice song lyric with accompanying picture. Just love the refrain, presentation, progression, rhythm and flow. God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week. Thanks for the lovely six, Deb