Intuition
Intuition is the sixth sense86 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello RP,
A carefully thought out analysis of the inner sense, written in rhyming quatrains.
Women seem to be more intuitive than men. I wonder if there is a scientific explanation for this.
Best wishes for the contest, RP. Nice to read you again. I've been away for a while.
Until next time,
Sonali
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Hello RP,
A carefully thought out analysis of the inner sense, written in rhyming quatrains.
Women seem to be more intuitive than men. I wonder if there is a scientific explanation for this.
Best wishes for the contest, RP. Nice to read you again. I've been away for a while.
Until next time,
Sonali
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Hello Sonali,
Yes, after a long time, but prompt in taking so much time, and passing so lovely as well as morale boosting comments. Thank you very much for the same.
So far as your 2nd sentence is concerned, you are 100% right, and it's a foolproof fact.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~RP.
Comment from Almahar826
Wow really great poem, I love it!!!
I can't go any higher than stars but
if i could have I would have!! It was excellent
and flowed and rhymed well! :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2016
Wow really great poem, I love it!!!
I can't go any higher than stars but
if i could have I would have!! It was excellent
and flowed and rhymed well! :)
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 25-May-2016
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Hello Almahar826,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments, and that too at this stage!
With best wishes,
~RP.
Comment from Cedar
This is a very well written poem. Your rhyming, rhythm and flow are all very well done. And your explanation of the subject is perfect. It's easy to write an ordinary poem, but a poem such as this one takes a great deal of thought to make it appealing to your readers and you have done that exceptionally well my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Take care. Bill
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
This is a very well written poem. Your rhyming, rhythm and flow are all very well done. And your explanation of the subject is perfect. It's easy to write an ordinary poem, but a poem such as this one takes a great deal of thought to make it appealing to your readers and you have done that exceptionally well my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Take care. Bill
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Hello Ceder,
What a wonderful review this is! & That too from like you a writer/poet!!
I'm thrilled to read your words.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Best of Luck wishes backed by the most coveted '5 + 1 shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose for your poem, the inner body is the center of our being
I love how you express the six sense God blessed us with.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
I like the artwork you choose for your poem, the inner body is the center of our being
I love how you express the six sense God blessed us with.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Hello Cookie,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your nice comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You're very welcome.
cooklie
Comment from koolaid228
Never seen intuition explained so deep, so well, I enjoyed reading this poem,
thank you for sharing such a nice read. koolaid228
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
Never seen intuition explained so deep, so well, I enjoyed reading this poem,
thank you for sharing such a nice read. koolaid228
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Hello Koolaid228,
What a wonderful review this is! I'm thrilled to read it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments backed by '5 + 1 shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, so good to see you my friend...I believe we have a sixth sense...much like God it helps us get through the hard times...and when you let go of all your stress...you feel more positive...and you have a worth...your head clears...and you can go meet your goals in life...a poem for thought RP...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
Hi RP, so good to see you my friend...I believe we have a sixth sense...much like God it helps us get through the hard times...and when you let go of all your stress...you feel more positive...and you have a worth...your head clears...and you can go meet your goals in life...a poem for thought RP...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Hi L. Raven,
What a wonderful review this is! I'm thrilled to read it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments backed by the most coveted '5 + 1 shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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you are so welcome my friend...always...you have a wonderful evening RP...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, so true, and when we stop using our intuition, being we were going down the wrong path for some reason, we will suffer because we didn't. And only if we use this gift that we all have, outcomes would of turned out so much better if we took advantage of this, our sixth sense. Thanks for the reminder and the author notes, too, for letting us know what is best for us all to enrich our lives.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
Oh, so true, and when we stop using our intuition, being we were going down the wrong path for some reason, we will suffer because we didn't. And only if we use this gift that we all have, outcomes would of turned out so much better if we took advantage of this, our sixth sense. Thanks for the reminder and the author notes, too, for letting us know what is best for us all to enrich our lives.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Caressa 08,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments backed by '5 + 1 shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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Oh, think I bookmarked this. And, need to recite your poem, everyday! As, I'm one who went astray, for quite a time, by not using then... my sixth sense...C.
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Oh, think I bookmarked this. And, need to recite your poem, everyday! As, I'm one who went astray, for quite a time, by not using then... my sixth sense...C.
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Hi Caressa_ 08,
I feel myself highly honored. Thanks a lot for such fabulous words!
~RP.
Comment from creativepenname
I enjoyed reading this poem. I especially like the rhyming pattern. The lines "Intuition is the sixth sense, resides veiled in every being, and consoling when we are tense, guides us straight to our well being" is definitely my favourite part of the poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
I enjoyed reading this poem. I especially like the rhyming pattern. The lines "Intuition is the sixth sense, resides veiled in every being, and consoling when we are tense, guides us straight to our well being" is definitely my favourite part of the poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Creativepenname,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments, and also quoting your favorite lines which gives me a personal touch.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good topic for your poem.
-Rhyme is effective.
-Ideas about intuition are interesting.
-It is the sixth sense, and helps in different kinds of situations.
-It helps as a guide, "Elevating the common sense"
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
-Good topic for your poem.
-Rhyme is effective.
-Ideas about intuition are interesting.
-It is the sixth sense, and helps in different kinds of situations.
-It helps as a guide, "Elevating the common sense"
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Respa1,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments, and also quoting your favorite line which gives me a personal touch.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are very welcome and I am glad you appreciated the comments. That means a lot. Have a good evening.
Comment from rspoet
This is a good entry for the contest
A nicely rhymed poem
with consistent eight syllable lines
Intuition is often mistaken for common sense,
recognized patterns in behavior
Excellent supporting art work
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
This is a good entry for the contest
A nicely rhymed poem
with consistent eight syllable lines
Intuition is often mistaken for common sense,
recognized patterns in behavior
Excellent supporting art work
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Rspoet,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.