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2016 GYPSY's HAIKU

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "2/4/2 Haiku ( Midnight )"
a published book of haiku

11 total reviews 
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Wow!
What gorgeous artwork, dear Gypsy.
I hope you do really well in the 2-4-2 contest with your entry.
It reminded me of a title to a movie. I think it was titled "Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil"
Best of luck to you, darlin'...
~Dean

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
    You are right, I didn't think about it but the title sounds a lot like mine. Those copycats dirty rats! LoL

    Thank you, darlin', I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my 2/4/2 contest entry. Please say a little prayer for me. I need all the help I can get. I never won a site contest in the year and a half I've been here. A little divine intervention may do the trick. :)

    Gypsy

reply by Dean Kuch on 29-Aug-2016
    Yeah, a little divine intervention never hurts.
    You're more than welcome.
    ~Dean ;)
Comment from l.raven
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HI Gypsy, sounds like the place to be...this is WOW!!!I love your wording...you are really good at these...beautiful picture...and the perfect wording...way to go you...LOL...very nicely done...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016
    Thank you, Linda, my sweet friend. You are always so nice. Thank you. Mwah! luv ya too.
    gypsy
reply by l.raven on 18-Aug-2016
    your so welcome you...smiling big...xxoo Linda
Comment from Ulla
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Hola Gitana, eso es un muy pero muy bueno 2-4-2 de verdad! Un ganador. No more six left or it would have been yours. I'm in awe. Loved it. Buen suerte. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
    Gracias bonita, eres muy amable y simpatica :) Your words are sixes and more. You are very kind, thank you, Ulla.
    gitana
Comment from Aussie
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Glorious presentation my friend. The illustration really complimented your poem. Best wishes for your contest entry. Have to go a long way to beat that Dean fellow! Don't know why they didn't make it 5-7-5?

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
    Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. I love the six pretty stars. Thank you!
    Gypsy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Gypsy,
Your 2-4-2 poem is a great presentation. Good job on the artwork, the color scheme, & your few words to tell a story.

I like the large text, too. Thank you for the notes. It is good to be reminded of the specifics of styles.

Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
    Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
    Gypsy
Comment from Jackarrie
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I really like your 2-4-2 poem, the presentation is so creative, and the contents leave a lot to the imagination.
well done, Mary

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
    Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie .Gypsy
Comment from Bollie
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This is so cool, Gypsy, this is why I love reading your poetry. You're always so creative and therefore a lot of fun to read. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)

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Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your intriguing, tiny verse and the beautiful geisha artwork. "Sin" is a powerful, concluding word. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)

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Comment from danpald
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The Garden so sweet
With a special treat
Found to be foul
When only a trial

Free love is never free
For the truth does claim a deed
Well the giving of love
With the heart fully gloved

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)

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Comment from Douglas Paul
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LOL this one is a provocative little poem that conjures up all kinds of "X" rated images, Good job on this and a great picture. Well done, my friend

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)

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