Comment from I am Cat

Exceptional

Hello Sister Gypsy,
I had to come back for this... having touched me so deeply when I've been so sad... I can't even say WHY it has, but it has... most notably, that second line:

gentle spirit years kind touch

and the thought that we all have this armor, but beneath it, we yearn to be touched gently... really gorgeous, your tender spirit comes through in this... and just when I needed it most.

Thank you,
Love you honey....
Sister Cat

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

I love you too, little sister. I am so glad that my words were meaningful to you. That is the point but it doesn't always work.
Thank you for the six stars and for remembering to go back, that was very nice, sweetie pie. Big Hug!!!!

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice poem, with a good flow and gentle easy to follow rhythm. Nice imagery, very powerful. Well done, thanks for sharing and have a great day!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you very much for the lovely review and the kinds words. I appreciate them.
gypsy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Gitana. Oh I like this one and the sound of a bugle adds to the words and feeling. Very well done. It's beautiful. Un abrazo de tu amiga ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Gracias Bonita

Eres muy amable.

Besitos

Tu amiga la gitana

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

beautiful little haiku with orchids and warrior spirit
seemingly contradictory
and in opposition to love
but she has passion or
she would not be a warrior...

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Some people hide behind a hard exterior because they have been hurt and they must protect their fragile spirit. OR a woman warrior is strong and fierce but deep inside she's still a woman who appreciates the beauty of a flower.

Thank you, Nika :)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This could apply to both a male and a female. We learn to protect our frail spirit by wearing a tough shell like that of a turtle. Great oxymoron at the end.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

thank you, you got the meaning of my haiku right. Not everyone does. You are right, it applies to all human beings, maybe to all sentient beings. I appreciate the review, sweetie pie, thank you.

How is your husband doing? How are you holding up? I hope things are getting better. I am sending you healing energy and love.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, even the strong and the brave ...have a gentle side...a soft touch...a kind heart...love your poem sweet girl...and your picture ...beautiful...love ya you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

thank you, Linda girl, you got the meaning of my haiku right. Not everyone does. You are right, it applies to all human beings, maybe to all sentient beings. I appreciate the review, sweetie pie, thank you. Love you too. :)
gypsy

reply by l.raven on 02-Sep-2016

you are so welcome...and have a wonderful evening...xxoo Love

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Gypsy. I like this one. Your words combine tenderness with strength. We all have need for both. Art work is beautiful and perfect accompaniment for your words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

Thank you, Marylin :) It's always good to see you. I am grateful for your review.

Gypsy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent thought. Even if she makes Navy Seal, she'll still have that soft, feminine side. There are time when she'll just want to be treated like a woman. The orchids would bolster her need to feel feminine on occasion. Hope she'll keep that warrior side, too. Lovely presentation. judi

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

No worries, she is a fighter and nothing will change that. It's part of her nature. But as you say, she is a woman and has that feminine side within her. I think it's very important to keep that side of you alive. Thank you, sweetie pie. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy

reply by judiverse on 02-Sep-2016

You're very welcome. No, you can't take that away. They appreciate being treated to orchids occasionally, too. judi

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your artwork selection is so parallel to your description, I have to assume the picture inspired the haiku. Thank you for your detailed notes on the form. The alliteration of "b's" intensify your message along with the vivid "orchids". Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

Thank you, sweetie pie. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Gypsy,

Your poem is lovely as usual. The picture of the woman is really nice. I can't figure out what she has on her arm though. It kind of looks like a couple of birds.

Kat

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

Thank you, sweetie pie. I appreciate your kind review. She is a warrior woman. She has a sword and a helmet on her arm.
Gypsy

reply by MizKat on 02-Sep-2016

Thanks for letting me know. I kept looking at it several times and still couldn't figure out what it was. Kat