Falling Leaves
10 word contest4 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry.Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry.Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Laidy
So cute. I really liked the imagery this poem played in my mind. I can imagine the kittens playing with the leaves as they encircle them in a gust of wind. Very lovely.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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So cute. I really liked the imagery this poem played in my mind. I can imagine the kittens playing with the leaves as they encircle them in a gust of wind. Very lovely.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you
Comment from RodG
I like the AUDIO IMAGERY of this 10-word poem that you've achieved from such words as "stepping" and "snapping" that echo the actions themselves.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I like the AUDIO IMAGERY of this 10-word poem that you've achieved from such words as "stepping" and "snapping" that echo the actions themselves.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-You have the 10 words.
-I like the use of one continuous thought.
-Description is good of the cat as it walks over the leaves.
-Good use of nature imagery, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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-Very nice image.
-You have the 10 words.
-I like the use of one continuous thought.
-Description is good of the cat as it walks over the leaves.
-Good use of nature imagery, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you
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You are welcome.