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Monet's Lily

...a nightly serenade

5 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
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A beautiful reflection in every sense of the term -use of verbs heightens the stillnes s 'basking' & 'awaits'- words are such powerful tools

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
    Thank you for sharing my vision!
Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. Beautiful artwork and background color that completes your entry well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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ooohhhh you got my vote. Yours is the best one so far and I doubt there will be a better one. Good job my friend.


basking in moon light <> Monet's pink lily awaits <>
tree frog serenade

smooth connection between lines one and two. good syllabic count. lovely satori

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much! I love Monet and water lilies. So, it just came together. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review. I know you're a busy lady!
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
I love your haiku abort Monet's famous pasting
Just on thing to think about which I found when writing a haiku -----


# Eliminate adverbs.
lily (eagerly) awaits

Gert

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thanks for the suggestion. Will see how I can revise.
reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Mar-2017
    it reads good
    Gert
Comment from marybell1
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I loved your 5-7-5 poem and choice of beautiful flower. I could just hear the frog's serenade. A lovely thought.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thank you for sharing my imaginary world!
reply by marybell1 on 15-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
reply by marybell1 on 16-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.