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Viewing comments for Chapter 329 "Fairy Surprise"Eclectic style
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Comment from tfawcus
Some people seem to think that fairies only belong in books. Your poem gives the lie to that! For those who have eyes to see, there is much of the world of faerie surrounding us! Care is needed to preserve it!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Some people seem to think that fairies only belong in books. Your poem gives the lie to that! For those who have eyes to see, there is much of the world of faerie surrounding us! Care is needed to preserve it!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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How free thinking is that! I love that you have faith in out-of-the-box possibility thinking. Thanks Tony for your kind review and stars.
Trisha
Comment from Curly Girly
This free verse read more like a badly punctuated story more than a poem. The tale was interesting. Personally, I think improvement is needed on punctuation. Consider more carefully which lines start with a capital letter.
Poets like to claim a licence to do what they like--and that is often why their good work remains unread.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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This free verse read more like a badly punctuated story more than a poem. The tale was interesting. Personally, I think improvement is needed on punctuation. Consider more carefully which lines start with a capital letter.
Poets like to claim a licence to do what they like--and that is often why their good work remains unread.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks for your opinion