Snowflake Dance
Little girls twirls about catching snowflakes in her mouth4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Great choice of words and a good description and choice of topic. The contrast was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
Great choice of words and a good description and choice of topic. The contrast was good and fit the scenario well. Good job. Regards. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Geeps
Hello there. I really liked your poem for this writing prompt. It reminds me of some of the best parts of winter and snow, especially when I was young. Now it means shoveling the car out at 5 in the morning and dangerous roads. :( Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
Hello there. I really liked your poem for this writing prompt. It reminds me of some of the best parts of winter and snow, especially when I was young. Now it means shoveling the car out at 5 in the morning and dangerous roads. :( Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments. Be careful out there on those roads.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a fun sedoka contest entry. Good job on its style. The picture is adorable. I imagine many can identify with our words either as a mom or a child, Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
This is a fun sedoka contest entry. Good job on its style. The picture is adorable. I imagine many can identify with our words either as a mom or a child, Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your read and the comments.
Comment from Ellie707
I like the title which matches the picture which backs up and supports the poem.
Strong imagery brings back fond memories of winter and snow time.
Good job!
Ellie
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
I like the title which matches the picture which backs up and supports the poem.
Strong imagery brings back fond memories of winter and snow time.
Good job!
Ellie
Comment Written 26-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the read and your comments. Glad to have stirred some good memories.
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You're welcome!