memory so bad
humorous 5-7-5 contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Easter is over
For them, but not for me though
I am missing eggs
I hunt all year long
While my memory plays games
I found two more now.
It is easier
Because they give off aroma
And it's not perfume. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Easter is over
For them, but not for me though
I am missing eggs
I hunt all year long
While my memory plays games
I found two more now.
It is easier
Because they give off aroma
And it's not perfume. Karen
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Lol! I love them all, but the last one had me laughing out loud.
I've been out of pocket this week, work has been overwhelming and I'm passing a kidney stone, not fun. Thank you for the awesome review, Karen.
God bless,
Steve
God bless,
Steve
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How do you get a kidney stone? I have never had one, but I am told they are close to what we feel like giving birth. Only we do it for 18 hours in a row every few minutes. With my first. :-)
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Mine mostly come from leafy greens and lagoons. Mine are also hereditary. Mine have lasted as long as a month, but most only take a couple of weeks. So I try to leave them out of my diet.
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Also, the pain is tremendous, but I have a high tolerance to pain, thank God.
Comment from zekeziemann
I just read your 5-7-5 and what?? I can't remember what I read or what I was going to write...just kidding. Well done. Memory loss is frustrating. I know.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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I just read your 5-7-5 and what?? I can't remember what I read or what I was going to write...just kidding. Well done. Memory loss is frustrating. I know.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome, funny review my friend.
God bless
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your humorous five-seven-five for the contest. I guess if you are going to find something good in getting old, hiding your own Easter eggs would fill the bill. Good luck!
~patty~
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your humorous five-seven-five for the contest. I guess if you are going to find something good in getting old, hiding your own Easter eggs would fill the bill. Good luck!
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Yup! Thank you for the awesome review Patty.
God
Bless
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I didn't get the joke at first and sat staring dumb as a post! But once I got the humour it is very funny and clever. Well done this is very good work and humorous I hope you do well in the competition kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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I didn't get the joke at first and sat staring dumb as a post! But once I got the humour it is very funny and clever. Well done this is very good work and humorous I hope you do well in the competition kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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LOL! I tell this to folks all the time.
Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh my goodness. I can relate as my husband is now in charge of Christmas presents and stocking stuffers. The kids have all moved out, except our adult son. So we basically buy our own gifts and stocking stuffers. I never thought to hide our own Easter eggs. I've never had an easter egg hunt. Maybe we should try it this year.
This is a good contest entry, though I'd loved to have seen you add a picture. Fanstorians are used to seeing pictures posted with poems and stories. Your syllables are all good. There are a lot of rules for this contest, but it does allow you to add a picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Oh my goodness. I can relate as my husband is now in charge of Christmas presents and stocking stuffers. The kids have all moved out, except our adult son. So we basically buy our own gifts and stocking stuffers. I never thought to hide our own Easter eggs. I've never had an easter egg hunt. Maybe we should try it this year.
This is a good contest entry, though I'd loved to have seen you add a picture. Fanstorians are used to seeing pictures posted with poems and stories. Your syllables are all good. There are a lot of rules for this contest, but it does allow you to add a picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the awesome review Joy. Unfortunately I live in a hotel and have difficulty finding computers other than my IPhone. I usually add pictures. You should definitely try the Easter egg hunt, they are a blast.
God bless
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. To hide your own Easter eggs are not too bad. The question is if you ever find them again or don't you ever search for them.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. To hide your own Easter eggs are not too bad. The question is if you ever find them again or don't you ever search for them.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review Sandra.
God bless
Comment from Kerry Foley
lol. That is so funny, "an elderly perk" lol, I'm so forgetful, I put things away for safe keeping and forget where I put it all the time. Hiding your own Easter eggs-heh-heh, I love it. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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lol. That is so funny, "an elderly perk" lol, I'm so forgetful, I put things away for safe keeping and forget where I put it all the time. Hiding your own Easter eggs-heh-heh, I love it. ~Kerry
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Same here Kerry! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
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Your very welcome, I gave you my vote:))
Good luck, hope you win.
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Awesome, thank you for the support my friend.
God Bless
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Anytime, it was my pleasure.
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! Sadly, this is not only a funny 5/7/5 humorous poem but a true one. I can definitely relate.
This is very well done and I wish you well in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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LOL! Sadly, this is not only a funny 5/7/5 humorous poem but a true one. I can definitely relate.
This is very well done and I wish you well in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Janet for the awesome review. I have always been this way, even as a young adult.
God bless
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You chose a very creative approach and the clever humor will be recognized by many. My question is, do you hide them so you know where they are OR because you know you will never see them again? All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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You chose a very creative approach and the clever humor will be recognized by many. My question is, do you hide them so you know where they are OR because you know you will never see them again? All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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LOL! No, I would like to eat them HeHe! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
A funny story with few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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This is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
A funny story with few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sharon for the awesome review.