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Comment from
Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha;
I truly enjoyed this poem. Not sure why, but the 'love thy neighbor' thing absolutely made me laugh. Perhaps it is because I'm writing about my childhood, and there was said to be an awful lot of 'loving thy neighbor' going around the neighborhood.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
It?s a clandestine thing LOL
Comment from
donette1914
very powerful and believable of how we should be very careful of our words with people because we don't know what they are going through behind close door well done it was a pleasure
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
Thanks donette, you?re very kind, thanks for reviewing.
Hug, Trisha
Comment from
ExperiencingLiphe
Thoughts can definitely be good or bad and it really does depend on what you do with your thoughts. Do you use them for good things or do you act out the bad ones. I suppose we all answer that differently
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
Thank you so much for reviewing, and I apologize for taking so long to thank you
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