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Writers Block

Failed to scare

8 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You clearly draw the reader in if they are writers. This a humorous truth. You create delightful spirit (no PUn intended) and invite the reader to reflect on their similar experiences. If they have not ever experienced such or have not as yet, they will be able to get a peek preview of how it can go. Well written. I voted for you.

 Comment Written 31-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Thank you, I really appreciate you taking time to read and review. I really can't write horror. :) Thanks again!
Comment from fm wright
Exceptional
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not only did it fit in the 3 chosen words well but it so well defines what my efforts come to when I try to write the same thing. however I like the advice in it and even though a piece might not turn out the way we want to this time we should never give up trying.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    I agree..thanks so much for this fantastic review and the six stars I really appreciate it.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Poet,

hahahaha! Wonder how many poems Dean has been referenced in? And of course, his ghoulish reputation is well deserved. hahaha! Nice submission for the contest. Sorry that your pen wouldn't cooperate. *smile*

Some notes, if I may?
1.) was way to(o) cute I realized

2.) Such boring protagonist's were they,
--> no possessive apostrophe, please

Thanks and good luck!



 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Thank you so much for this nice review and for the editing help, i always appreciate it.
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
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What a superb use of the words to be included in this 3 words in a poemwhile engaging the reader in a journey to discover one's inner ghoulish Muse -

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Wow! Thank you for this stellar review and the six stars! You made my week.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the writer's block - the dark and scary night, a ghost house, the King of Fanstory horror all before the poet but poet with courage started writing this; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Thank you as always.
Comment from bob cullen
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I loved your tongue in cheek approach to the horror genre in poetry. Your salute to the king was also appropriate.
While it may have lacked in the scare factor, it's rhyme was really good. And it was delivered with a cool light-hearted approach.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
    Thank you for this great review, it's much appreciated.
Comment from aanneee
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Great picture choice, color choice and word choices. This got a big old chuckle out of me and I found it very amusing, just had fun reading it and I thank you for that and I wish you luck with the 3 Words In A Poem contest...Dinah

 Comment Written 29-May-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
    Thank you for this nice review, im so glad you liked it .
Comment from meeshu
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this is really quite clever, writing a long poem about not being able to write a poem. it is scary not writing scary stuff.. good luck in contest..

 Comment Written 29-May-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
    Hshaha..Thank you , i appreciate you taking time to read and review.