Going Out Of My Head.
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Comment from Liberty Justice
"I'm searching for better days" is a very strong and powerful goal and objective. Seems this woman is having tough time staying with this man who loves her. Looks like she told him goodbye. This poem could be made into a hit record. Good luck in contest. I gave you my thumbs up. Check out mine, also. NICE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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"I'm searching for better days" is a very strong and powerful goal and objective. Seems this woman is having tough time staying with this man who loves her. Looks like she told him goodbye. This poem could be made into a hit record. Good luck in contest. I gave you my thumbs up. Check out mine, also. NICE. liberty justice
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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Hi Lady Lib. It's me. There is no wonder in my mind why I am sooo glad that I am one of your fans. You are my inspiration, in that you are so helpful, encouraging, and motivating. You like me for who I am, in that you are so cognizant concerning my efforts. You recognized my poem, "Going Out Of My Head, for what it really is. I don't know that it is a hit record. But it was originally written as a song. I just extracted the music, and set it forth as a poem to see how people would like it that way. And you recognized what I have done. Thank you, Lady Lib. You always give me a thumbs up. So here's my thumbs up to you, my pen-pal friend. Your friendship makes my eyes watery with appreciation and thanksgiving. I'll be back, Lady Lib. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Hi Rhonnie! Check out my
writings, also. Liberty justice
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Feelings Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of your trodden feelings is clear and well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Feelings Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of your trodden feelings is clear and well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
Comment from meeshu
this is a good idea for a poem and the form works. but your rhymes are all over the place with no scheme. I turns to free verse and back again. it wouldn't take too much to help it..
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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this is a good idea for a poem and the form works. but your rhymes are all over the place with no scheme. I turns to free verse and back again. it wouldn't take too much to help it..
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018