Don't wish-Do
Trying another form53 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Good work on this five line poem for the contest. (especially since it's your first one)
Excellent sentiment and philophy.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
Good work on this five line poem for the contest. (especially since it's your first one)
Excellent sentiment and philophy.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
I am delighted you used the 5-Line form for a self-improvement poem, especially since it is short enough to become a mantra or post on the refrigerator! Here's to "results" and best wishes in the contest--also, keep stretching your wings and having fun- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
I am delighted you used the 5-Line form for a self-improvement poem, especially since it is short enough to become a mantra or post on the refrigerator! Here's to "results" and best wishes in the contest--also, keep stretching your wings and having fun- Joan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This message earned a sixer because it is very well penned. I enjoyed reading this and it is a message that needs to be shared. "Put your money where your mouth is," came to mind. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a safe 4th of July.
Brigitte
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
This message earned a sixer because it is very well penned. I enjoyed reading this and it is a message that needs to be shared. "Put your money where your mouth is," came to mind. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a safe 4th of July.
Brigitte
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much and yes put your money where your mouth is, a lot need to do this, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Friend!
Your well-crafted 5/7/5 speaks volumes! Take action; don't just wish or pray for whatever needs to be done. Go out and get whatever needs to be done, done! I embrace and fully support the premiss and message! Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
Hello Friend!
Your well-crafted 5/7/5 speaks volumes! Take action; don't just wish or pray for whatever needs to be done. Go out and get whatever needs to be done, done! I embrace and fully support the premiss and message! Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there Kahpot
This is an excellent five line poem. Such a powerful message and so true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
Hi there Kahpot
This is an excellent five line poem. Such a powerful message and so true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Gert sherwood
smiles to you kahpot what you said in your five line poem you are so right dreaming and wishing for something to happen no way will take place until we take action and make our wish and dream come into existence
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
smiles to you kahpot what you said in your five line poem you are so right dreaming and wishing for something to happen no way will take place until we take action and make our wish and dream come into existence
Gert
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, a perfect five line poem written true to form with a good strong message. Not easy to get messages across in these short forms but you have done so, and very well. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
Hi Kahpot, a perfect five line poem written true to form with a good strong message. Not easy to get messages across in these short forms but you have done so, and very well. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from rjuselius
this is a lovely philosophical sentiment dear kahpot! daydreaming is a delightful pastime but if you need things done is to think ahead.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
this is a lovely philosophical sentiment dear kahpot! daydreaming is a delightful pastime but if you need things done is to think ahead.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Cedar
I enjoyed reading your poem. My wife uses the very same words on me occasionally. Her translation of these words of wisdom is, "Get off your ass and go do something."
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
I enjoyed reading your poem. My wife uses the very same words on me occasionally. Her translation of these words of wisdom is, "Get off your ass and go do something."
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much and yes wives have a different way with words****kahpot
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Uh-oh and I am such a wishful thinker! This is a great little poem. This is one of those that should be posted in workplaces and schools. Profound, short, but to the point. I like it very much! Great job and Good Luck with this one!
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
Uh-oh and I am such a wishful thinker! This is a great little poem. This is one of those that should be posted in workplaces and schools. Profound, short, but to the point. I like it very much! Great job and Good Luck with this one!
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot