Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Journalist"My book of poems and stories
9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Well done with this abecedarian poem which is written in meter and is well rhymed, too! I applaud you for the journaling and it's not easy to do as we may not want to remember everything a day presents but after the fact, it's a blessing to have our journals.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Well done with this abecedarian poem which is written in meter and is well rhymed, too! I applaud you for the journaling and it's not easy to do as we may not want to remember everything a day presents but after the fact, it's a blessing to have our journals.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. I had fun with the challenge of this contest.Have a good weekend.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written abecedarian poem about jounal writing, that is one thing I cannot do, because my life is too quiet and boring, I rather write about other things I am dreaming about or what I find interesting
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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A very well-written abecedarian poem about jounal writing, that is one thing I cannot do, because my life is too quiet and boring, I rather write about other things I am dreaming about or what I find interesting
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your review. I value your reviews very much and can always count on one from you when I enter a contest. You are so faithful. I appreciate your time and comments. Have a good day.
Comment from BermyBye50
A well written Abecedarian' poem with an intriguing subject. A Journal is a personal journey that describes the passages of one's life anf you've captured that very essence in this amazing write.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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A well written Abecedarian' poem with an intriguing subject. A Journal is a personal journey that describes the passages of one's life anf you've captured that very essence in this amazing write.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. It is very much appreciated. This was a very challenging contest to write for, and I enjoyed the challenge. Have a good day.
Comment from country ranch writer
Undecided on what to do and how to do it and is procrastinating is his one downfall. can he handle the decisions he must make?
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Undecided on what to do and how to do it and is procrastinating is his one downfall. can he handle the decisions he must make?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. It is very much appreciated. This was a very challenging contest to write for, and I enjoyed the challenge. Have a good day.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Instructional, educational and interesting poem. Questions answered are intelligent and insightful... The last two lines make an enlightening conclusion.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Instructional, educational and interesting poem. Questions answered are intelligent and insightful... The last two lines make an enlightening conclusion.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. It is very much appreciated. This was a very challenging contest to write for, and I enjoyed the challenge. Have a good day.
Comment from Terry wrote
This is so well written, and held my attention throughout. I did not realize I was reading a contest entry until I reached the end notes ... and in looking back over it, I see it has met the contest requirements as beautifully as it entertained my thoughts. Thank you for sharing this!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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This is so well written, and held my attention throughout. I did not realize I was reading a contest entry until I reached the end notes ... and in looking back over it, I see it has met the contest requirements as beautifully as it entertained my thoughts. Thank you for sharing this!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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I am honored to receive your six star review for my entry. This was a very challenging contest and I really enjoyed the challenge. Thank you for your kind review. Have a good day.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Your execution of the poetry form works so well, and you tell a story of inner struggle and self doubt (my perspective at least) that is entirely universal and true.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Your execution of the poetry form works so well, and you tell a story of inner struggle and self doubt (my perspective at least) that is entirely universal and true.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. It is very much appreciated. This was a very challenging contest to write for, and I enjoyed the challenge. Have a good day.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I love your journaling topic and the photo too. This is a wonderfully written abecedarian poem. They are quite challenging..., especially that X, which you found a clever way to use. Good luck in the contest. This is a lovely entry.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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I love your journaling topic and the photo too. This is a wonderfully written abecedarian poem. They are quite challenging..., especially that X, which you found a clever way to use. Good luck in the contest. This is a lovely entry.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Have a good and 'cool' evening. (IT is 100 degrees here!)
Comment from Lady Jane
Suggestion only because punctuation is used throughout piece:
However, one must pay ione's dues. :)
What an interesting Abecedarian you've constructed here. I like it. I like the pondering, the mystery, the whole of it. Yes, we do have to decide to write, or not to write, to keep, or shred, to allow our muse to come out day and night, or lock him/her in the closet, LOL. Nicely done here, writer. I wouldn't change a thing except the comma mentioned above ... keep writing and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Suggestion only because punctuation is used throughout piece:
However, one must pay ione's dues. :)
What an interesting Abecedarian you've constructed here. I like it. I like the pondering, the mystery, the whole of it. Yes, we do have to decide to write, or not to write, to keep, or shred, to allow our muse to come out day and night, or lock him/her in the closet, LOL. Nicely done here, writer. I wouldn't change a thing except the comma mentioned above ... keep writing and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much. Comma has been applied and your review very much appreciated. Have a good 'cool' evening. (It is 100 degrees here!)
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It?s 95 here :) I?m traveling so doing reviewing from the passenger seat. Perfect time to get some done, no? Hehe. I?ll try to stay cool sitting in my air conditioned car, for the next two hours anyways. LOL