Rejuvenate
NatureĆ¢??s watering hose10 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
very beautiful of the rainfall and harmony restored
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
very beautiful of the rainfall and harmony restored
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Beautiful photo...it is fitting for the nature poem. You have a well-written 5-7-5 poem and the format have been done perfectly. "Harmony restored!" Such a great last line. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
Beautiful photo...it is fitting for the nature poem. You have a well-written 5-7-5 poem and the format have been done perfectly. "Harmony restored!" Such a great last line. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from mally mack
Good Afternoon
Good entry into this contest. The syllables in your lines look perfect to me. I would suggest double checking the error in your description above the title.
Best Wishes to you
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
Good Afternoon
Good entry into this contest. The syllables in your lines look perfect to me. I would suggest double checking the error in your description above the title.
Best Wishes to you
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a wonderful commentary of the beauty of nature. Thirteen syllables aren't a lot when you're trying to express something so vast, but you managed it :-) This flows like a true haiku, which is great.
I also really like the picture you chose to go with it.
Well written!
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
This is a wonderful commentary of the beauty of nature. Thirteen syllables aren't a lot when you're trying to express something so vast, but you managed it :-) This flows like a true haiku, which is great.
I also really like the picture you chose to go with it.
Well written!
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent descriptive imagery
Darkness, wilting flower, hopefully the rain will restore
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
This is an interesting 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent descriptive imagery
Darkness, wilting flower, hopefully the rain will restore
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from heart of Lou
You have written a beautiful 5-7-5 poem about daffodils, first with the dark clouds rolling in, then restored by a good rainfall. Just like in life, after cloudy periods, we make up and happiness is restored.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
You have written a beautiful 5-7-5 poem about daffodils, first with the dark clouds rolling in, then restored by a good rainfall. Just like in life, after cloudy periods, we make up and happiness is restored.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Dark clouds, open field,
wilting daffodils, rainfall,
harmony restored....oh wilting we do when it's hot...withered and wizened...rain works?..
But I've tried it on my skin and well...still wrinkly lol
God bless...love this
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
Dark clouds, open field,
wilting daffodils, rainfall,
harmony restored....oh wilting we do when it's hot...withered and wizened...rain works?..
But I've tried it on my skin and well...still wrinkly lol
God bless...love this
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the laugh and the review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the wonder of nature. The flowers seem wilted and on the brink to die. When the rain falls it seems they get new life and bloom a while longer.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the wonder of nature. The flowers seem wilted and on the brink to die. When the rain falls it seems they get new life and bloom a while longer.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yep and we need moe of it! There has been very little rain all over Europe and we need more of it, daffodils like lots of water, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
Yep and we need moe of it! There has been very little rain all over Europe and we need more of it, daffodils like lots of water, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from mermaids
You have a clear picture of nature in action here, flowers may wilt but rain will bring them back. Excellent use of words and I love daffodils, so wonderful to come across a poem about them reviving.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
You have a clear picture of nature in action here, flowers may wilt but rain will bring them back. Excellent use of words and I love daffodils, so wonderful to come across a poem about them reviving.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your fine review.