A Signature Dance
A Dance to Remember6 total reviews
Comment from eltwelve
Very nicely done. Your story helps put into perspective, I also come from a family that loves music and dance. I have fond memories of dance and music through my mom whom I lost 2 years ago
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Very nicely done. Your story helps put into perspective, I also come from a family that loves music and dance. I have fond memories of dance and music through my mom whom I lost 2 years ago
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a very special poem with such an emotional foundation. Family stories and moments really do define our lives. I loved that you shared such precious photos with your poem and then added even more tender moments with your author's notes. Good luck in the contest. You should do well. :)
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What a very special poem with such an emotional foundation. Family stories and moments really do define our lives. I loved that you shared such precious photos with your poem and then added even more tender moments with your author's notes. Good luck in the contest. You should do well. :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
The detailed note shows the importance of this event summed up so neatly in the 3-5-3 syllables allowed. What a marvelous idea to put on your father's hat for this very special occasion.
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The detailed note shows the importance of this event summed up so neatly in the 3-5-3 syllables allowed. What a marvelous idea to put on your father's hat for this very special occasion.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
Comment from donette1914
what a wonderful piece and remembering your father with his lovely bride
excellent!
in runs very smoothly and very creative
i love the artwork
thank you for sharing it was an honor to read your work
donette1914 oct 28 2018
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what a wonderful piece and remembering your father with his lovely bride
excellent!
in runs very smoothly and very creative
i love the artwork
thank you for sharing it was an honor to read your work
donette1914 oct 28 2018
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest.
I believe you have a slight problem in line four,
as I count only four syllables. You could add a word like "her" to get five.
Otherwise, and excellent poem of human emotion.
Excellent author notes
Best wishes to you
RS
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest.
I believe you have a slight problem in line four,
as I count only four syllables. You could add a word like "her" to get five.
Otherwise, and excellent poem of human emotion.
Excellent author notes
Best wishes to you
RS
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your comments. I used three syllable counters to check the syllable count of all three lines of the poem. All of them indicate there are three syllables in the word consoles. The addition of the word her would make the syllable count in line two 6.
Eugene
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I used Webster's dictionary and How Many Syllables. But it doesn't matter, if you have a source, stay with it.
Good luck
RS
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RS,
I reviewed the syllable count using How Many Syllables and noted the Syllable Rules section on how to count syllables and it appears the syllable count for the word consoles is 2. Thank you for your help in clarifying this matter. I will use this as a resource for all future entries.
Thanks
Eugene
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Dance writing prompt.
Much is sad in your few words and the pictures and story bring it all to life.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Dance writing prompt.
Much is sad in your few words and the pictures and story bring it all to life.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018