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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Rhonnie69. Lady Lib is not doing too well these days. Trump closed all the border stations at our Southern border. So, migrants can't come in legally. They run out of money and shelter. Eventually, they get desperate and try to cross in the desert. Good sanitarian leave out bottles of water for them. So, you know what our border control agents did? They emptied all the water into the ground. A little seven year old girl died of dehydration as a result. She was denied medical attention for ninety minutes. If she had just received IV fluids she'd still be alive. Just cruel. He is a murderer. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    HI THERE PAM: I deeply regret that I'm just getting back to you concerning this information. I feel sad about this to the bottom of my heart. This somber information prompted me to write a short script on it. It's posted in my portfolio at the #2 entry. It is entitled: "The Lord Is My Shepherd." I had to do something, Pam. What else could I do? Be on the look-out. You are about to get a lot of reviews from me on your paintings and your poems. You already know that I like your artistic witty work. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Kerry Foley
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This is a really cute little write, My friend, lol. Guess she can't do much else but stand there. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

Comment from phill doran
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Hello Rhonnie
"They also serve who only stand and wait." is a very well-known line from Milton's sonnet "When I Consider How My Light is Spent". Results do not spring only from action, but also from being passive.
There's a current competition for a six-word 'story': perhaps you can apply your skill to that too: you are 5/6ths of the way there.
Thanks for posting this Rhonnie
I wish you well with your continued writing
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

Comment from kahpot
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This is a wonderful statement and yes she does stand for all in liberty and justice, great artwork I really like that, very well done and a message for all****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018